[Moims-dai] OAIS-IF Rationale Scenarios and Requirements-20210219 my comments

[david at giaretta.org]

Thanks Roberta

 

Thanks for the detailed comments. I’ll make the corrections.

 

Regards

 

..David

 

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Subject: [Moims-dai] OAIS-IF Rationale Scenarios and Requirements-20210219
my comments

 

Hi David, Hi All,

 

I read the updated version of the document:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/vvjmkh7lkb93gwx/OAIS-IF%20Rationale%20Scenarios%20
and%20Requirements-20210219.docx?dl=0
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I send you in the attached PDF copy, my annotations with  few editorial
suggested changes.

Changes in section 2.3 are clear. Up to section 7 the document is very clear
and complete. 

 

Kind Regards

 

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