[Moims-dai] OAIS-IF Rationale Scenarios and Requirements-20210219 my comments

[Roberta Svanetti]

Hi David, Hi All,

I read the updated version of the document:  https://www.dropbox.com/s/vvjmkh7lkb93gwx/OAIS-IF%20Rationale%20Scenarios%20and%20Requirements-20210219.docx?dl=0<https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.dropbox.com%2Fs%2Fvvjmkh7lkb93gwx%2FOAIS-IF%2520Rationale%2520Scenarios%2520and%2520Requirements-20210219.docx%3Fdl%3D0&data=04%7C01%7CRoberta.Svanetti%40dedagroup.it%7C491f3fc34f9d4b34f2c008d8d7dc71a1%7Cbbf156d433fa4fee86f62cfcb1359ef0%7C0%7C0%7C637496690127127087%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C2000&sdata=WN41Sd3aN0IUtrxDJ5DCXjqAOt3h1LPlwDBCFAjCztE%3D&reserved=0> to give a clearer idea of how I I send you in the attached PDF copy, my annotations with  few editorial suggested changes.
Changes in section 2.3 are clear. Up to section 7 the document is very clear and complete.

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