[Moims-dai] OAIS version ready for CCSDS Technical Editor - please check

[garrett at his.com]

Hi,

 

Looks good to me.

I agree with your proposal to finish this and get it to the CCSDS Editor.

 

May there be peace in your life,

-JOhn

 

From: MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> On Behalf Of
david at giaretta.org
Sent: Monday, September 7, 2020 7:11 AM
To: 'MOIMS-Data Archive Interoperability' <moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: Re: [Moims-dai] OAIS version ready for CCSDS Technical Editor -
please check

 

Anyone else noted any issues? Please let me know otherwise I will send this
to the CCSDS Editor tomorrow.

 

In terms of Terry's suggested I propose to spell out PAIS as he suggests,
but not change anything else because, although they are useful comments it
would just keep the book open for discussion.

 

..David

 

From: MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org
<mailto:moims-dai-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> > On Behalf Of Terry Longstreth
Sent: 03 September 2020 16:16
To: moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org <mailto:moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org> 
Subject: Re: [Moims-dai] OAIS version ready for CCSDS Technical Editor -
please check

 

Under document control, Notes section: 

*	PAIS should be spelled out
*	Action on Annex B should be stated, by for example, replacing first
sentence with: 

"ANNEX B from the previous issue has been substantially rewritten.
Previously, it described the relationship of OAIS to other standards; but
its contents were increasingly out of date as those other standards were
developed along different directions and timelines as compared to OAIS
development."

1.4 Conformance, last paragraph, is confusing.  It might help if we
explained the difference between normative (1.6.2, 2.3, 4.3) and Mandatory
(and do we expect to extend 16363 to accommodate all those) :       

To summarize, Sections 1.6.2, 2.3, 3.2 and 4.3 are normative and form the
basis of conformance to this Recommended Practice. All other sections are
informative, but could aid the user in designing archives that conform to
this Recommended Practice.

/s/Terry Longstreth

 

 

 

 

On 2020-09-03 6:00 AM, david at giaretta.org <mailto:david at giaretta.org>
wrote:

The updated and approved version of OAIS is at
https://cwe.ccsds.org/moims/docs/MOIMS-DAI/Draft%20Documents/OAIS%20v3/650x0
020_CESG_Approval_Mod-20200901-SEA-approved.doc?Web=0
<https://cwe.ccsds.org/moims/docs/MOIMS-DAI/Draft%20Documents/OAIS%20v3/650x
0020_CESG_Approval_Mod-20200901-SEA-approved.doc?Web=0%20> 

 

I'd appreciate it if people could take a look to make sure things are as
expected.

 

Then I'll send it on to the CCSDS Technical Editor.

 

Regards

 

.>David

 

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