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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>Hi,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Looks good to me.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I agree with your proposal to finish this and get it to the CCSDS Editor.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>May there be peace in your life,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>-JOhn<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b>From:</b> MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org> <b>On Behalf Of </b>david@giaretta.org<br><b>Sent:</b> Monday, September 7, 2020 7:11 AM<br><b>To:</b> 'MOIMS-Data Archive Interoperability' <moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org><br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Moims-dai] OAIS version ready for CCSDS Technical Editor - please check<o:p></o:p></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>Anyone else noted any issues? Please let me know otherwise I will send this to the CCSDS Editor tomorrow.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>In terms of Terry’s suggested I propose to spell out PAIS as he suggests, but not change anything else because, although they are useful comments it would just keep the book open for discussion.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>..David<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>From:</span></b><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'> MOIMS-DAI <<a href="mailto:moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org</a>> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Terry Longstreth<br><b>Sent:</b> 03 September 2020 16:16<br><b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org</a><br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Moims-dai] OAIS version ready for CCSDS Technical Editor - please check<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-GB style='color:red'>Under document control, Notes section: </span><span lang=EN-GB style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'><o:p></o:p></span></p><ul type=disc><li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3'><span lang=EN-GB>PAIS should be spelled out<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3'><span lang=EN-GB>Action on Annex B should be stated, by for example, replacing first sentence with: <o:p></o:p></span></li></ul><p style='mso-margin-top-alt:9.35pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:5.0pt;margin-left:85.7pt'><span lang=EN-GB>"ANNEX B from the previous issue <b><i>has been substantially rewritten. Previously, it </i></b>described the relationship of OAIS to other standards; but its contents were <b><i>increasingly</i></b> out of date as those other standards<b><i> were developed </i></b>along different directions and timelines as compared to OAIS development."<o:p></o:p></span></p><p><span lang=EN-GB style='color:red'>1.4 Conformance, last paragraph, is confusing. It might help if we explained the difference between normative (1.6.2, 2.3, 4.3) and Mandatory (and do we expect to extend 16363 to accommodate all those) :</span><span lang=EN-GB> <o:p></o:p></span></p><blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>To summarize, Sections 1.6.2, 2.3, 3.2 and 4.3 are normative and form the basis of conformance to this Recommended Practice. All other sections are informative, but could aid the user in designing archives that conform to this Recommended Practice.<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></blockquote></blockquote><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>/s/Terry Longstreth<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB>On 2020-09-03 6:00 AM, <a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal>The updated and approved version of OAIS is at <a href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/moims/docs/MOIMS-DAI/Draft%20Documents/OAIS%20v3/650x0020_CESG_Approval_Mod-20200901-SEA-approved.doc?Web=0%20">https://cwe.ccsds.org/moims/docs/MOIMS-DAI/Draft%20Documents/OAIS%20v3/650x0020_CESG_Approval_Mod-20200901-SEA-approved.doc?Web=0 </a><span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>I’d appreciate it if people could take a look to make sure things are as expected.<span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Then I’ll send it on to the CCSDS Technical Editor.<span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Regards<span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>.>David<span lang=EN-GB><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span lang=EN-GB style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><pre><span lang=EN-GB>_______________________________________________<o:p></o:p></span></pre><pre><span lang=EN-GB>MOIMS-DAI mailing list<o:p></o:p></span></pre><pre><span lang=EN-GB><a href="mailto:MOIMS-DAI@mailman.ccsds.org">MOIMS-DAI@mailman.ccsds.org</a><o:p></o:p></span></pre><pre><span lang=EN-GB><a href="https://mailman.ccsds.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/moims-dai">https://mailman.ccsds.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/moims-dai</a><o:p></o:p></span></pre></blockquote><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>-- <br><img border=0 width=339 height=142 style='width:3.5312in;height:1.4791in' id="Picture_x0020_1" src="cid:image001.jpg@01D68585.207DACA0"><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></body></html>