[Moims-dai] OAIS version ready for CCSDS Technical Editor - please check

[Terry Longstreth]

Under document control, Notes section:

  * PAIS should be spelled out
  * Action on Annex B should be stated, by for example, replacing first
    sentence with:

    "ANNEX B from the previous issue */has been substantially rewritten.
    Previously, it /*described the relationship of OAIS to other
    standards; but its contents were /*increasingly*/ out of date as
    those other standards/*were*//*developed */along different
    directions and timelines as compared to OAIS development."

1.4 Conformance, last paragraph, is confusing.  It might help if we 
explained the difference between normative (1.6.2, 2.3, 4.3) and 
Mandatory (and do we expect to extend 16363 to accommodate all those) :

        To summarize, Sections 1.6.2, 2.3, 3.2 and 4.3 are normative and
        form the basis of conformance to this Recommended Practice. All
        other sections are informative, but could aid the user in
        designing archives that conform to this Recommended Practice.

/s/Terry Longstreth




On 2020-09-03 6:00 AM, david at giaretta.org wrote:
>
> The updated and approved version of OAIS is at 
> https://cwe.ccsds.org/moims/docs/MOIMS-DAI/Draft%20Documents/OAIS%20v3/650x0020_CESG_Approval_Mod-20200901-SEA-approved.doc?Web=0 
> <https://cwe.ccsds.org/moims/docs/MOIMS-DAI/Draft%20Documents/OAIS%20v3/650x0020_CESG_Approval_Mod-20200901-SEA-approved.doc?Web=0%20>
>
> I’d appreciate it if people could take a look to make sure things are 
> as expected.
>
> Then I’ll send it on to the CCSDS Technical Editor.
>
> Regards
>
> .>David
>
>
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