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<p><font color="#ff0000">Under document control, Notes section: </font><br>
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PAIS should be spelled out</li>
<li>Action on Annex B should be stated, by for example, replacing
first sentence with: <br>
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"ANNEX B from the previous issue <b><i>has been substantially
rewritten. Previously, it </i></b>described the
relationship of OAIS to
other standards; but its contents were <i><b>increasingly</b></i>
out of date as
those other standards<i><b> were</b></i><i><b> developed </b></i>along
different directions and
timelines as compared to OAIS development."</p>
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<p><font color="#ff0000">1.4 Conformance, last paragraph, is
confusing. It might help if we explained the difference between
normative (1.6.2, 2.3, 4.3) and Mandatory (and do we expect to
extend 16363 to accommodate all those) :</font> <br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">To summarize, Sections 1.6.2, 2.3,
3.2 and 4.3 are normative and form
the basis of conformance to this Recommended Practice. All
other
sections are informative, but could aid the user in designing
archives that conform to this Recommended Practice.</div>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">/s/Terry Longstreth<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2020-09-03 6:00 AM,
<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a> wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">The updated and approved
version of OAIS is at <a
href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/moims/docs/MOIMS-DAI/Draft%20Documents/OAIS%20v3/650x0020_CESG_Approval_Mod-20200901-SEA-approved.doc?Web=0%20"
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">I’d appreciate it if
people could take a look to make sure things are as
expected.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Then I’ll send it on to
the CCSDS Technical Editor.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">.>David<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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