[Moims-dai] IPELTU reading results

david at giaretta.org david at giaretta.org
Tue Oct 20 10:32:37 UTC 2020 

Hi Roberta

 

Thanks for the detailed comments. I have updated the document – see
https://www.dropbox.com/s/lxp0qltfj5p7i3v/CCSDS653.0R1-20201020.docx?dl=0

 

..David 

 

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To: MOIMS-Data Archive Interoperability <moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: [Moims-dai] IPELTU reading results

 

Hi David, hi all,

 

Please find the following few changes to IPELTU, resulting from the last
version review I have done.

 

Page iii   - [Foreword text specific for this document 
]  RS: Should we add
the sentences like “This document is a proposal of technical Recommended
Practice for providing guidance for projects about the additional
information 
.”?

Page vi – RS check the box with release comments. It appears with a black
background. 

Page vii  - Page C-5  RS in the Table od contents  please check  that all
annexes are harmonized in the titles  for example “Annex C :”  instead of
“Annex C” 

Page 1-1 – --- communities for this practices – e.g.   
.   RS should we add
also Libraries and Life Sciences communities?

Page 1-1 – in the list after the sentence “This Recommended Practice
accomplishes 
” be consistent and add “;” at the end of sentence “-forms a
basis for 
”

Page 1-3 – par. 1.3 Applicability see my comment above on adding also
Libraries and Life Sciences (that includes also pharmaceutical, medical
devices and biotech companies and not only Research Organizations)

Page 1-6 – please check consistency between terms definitions for Content
Information, Preservation Description Information, Representation
Information and the new OAIS terms definition. 

Page 1-8 – par. 1.9 references  it seams that the link  in the reference
[2]redirect on a page not found. May bee the DAMA.org retired the first
version of DAMA.

Page 4-3 – in the sentence starting with “for example, they may be
information 
”, check consistency and add upper case or lower case to each
bullet item. Add “.” At the end of last item.

 

Kind Regards

 

 

Roberta Svanetti

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Tuesday of the month

Activity

Technical Editor(s)


1st 

ISO 16363    Audit and Certification Metrics

John Garrett, David Giaretta


2nd

IPELTU Info Preservation Enabling Long-Term Usage

David Giaretta, Roberta Svanetti


3rd

OAIS-IF DAADD    OAIS Interoperability Framework – Digital Archive
Architecture Design Doc

Steve Hughes


4th

Group administration, Planning, new projects, or special issues identified
other weeks

 


5th 

Group administration, Planning, new projects, or special issues identified
other weeks

 

 

Topics of discussion 2nd Tuesday of the month: 

 

*	Main point IPELTU catch-up – see
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*	ISO 16919
*	ISO 16363 status
*	OAIS status
*	OAIS-IF update

 

 

..David

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