[Moims-dai] IPELTU reading results

Tue Oct 20 09:23:18 UTC 2020

Hi David, hi all,

Please find the following few changes to IPELTU, resulting from the last version review I have done.

Page iii   - [Foreword text specific for this document ...]  RS: Should we add the sentences like "This document is a proposal of technical Recommended Practice for providing guidance for projects about the additional information ...."?
Page vi - RS check the box with release comments. It appears with a black background.
Page vii  - Page C-5  RS in the Table od contents  please check  that all annexes are harmonized in the titles  for example "Annex C :"  instead of "Annex C"
Page 1-1 - --- communities for this practices - e.g.   ....   RS should we add also Libraries and Life Sciences communities?
Page 1-1 - in the list after the sentence "This Recommended Practice accomplishes ..." be consistent and add ";" at the end of sentence "-forms a basis for ..."
Page 1-3 - par. 1.3 Applicability see my comment above on adding also Libraries and Life Sciences (that includes also pharmaceutical, medical devices and biotech companies and not only Research Organizations)
Page 1-6 - please check consistency between terms definitions for Content Information, Preservation Description Information, Representation Information and the new OAIS terms definition.
Page 1-8 - par. 1.9 references  it seams that the link  in the reference [2]redirect on a page not found. May bee the DAMA.org retired the first version of DAMA.
Page 4-3 - in the sentence starting with "for example, they may be information ...", check consistency and add upper case or lower case to each bullet item. Add "." At the end of last item.

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ISO 16363    Audit and Certification Metrics
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2nd

IPELTU Info Preservation Enabling Long-Term Usage

David Giaretta, Roberta Svanetti

3rd

OAIS-IF DAADD    OAIS Interoperability Framework - Digital Archive Architecture Design Doc

Steve Hughes

4th

Group administration, Planning, new projects, or special issues identified other weeks

5th

Group administration, Planning, new projects, or special issues identified other weeks

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