[Moims-dai] Component Diagram and Updated Book

[david at giaretta.org]

You use "Implementation Framework" instead of "Interoperability Framework"
in a couple of places.

 

..David

 

From: MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> On Behalf Of Terry
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kearneysolutions at gmail.com; MOIMS-Data Archive Interoperability
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Subject: Re: [Moims-dai] Component Diagram and Updated Book

 

Steve,

I don't have Microsoft and I'm not sure if Libreoffice interprets the
non-standard markup correctly so I didn't want to redline your  document (or
Mike's version). 

Some things I noticed: 

1.	Section 2.3 Derived Interfaces, lists two package types for
consumers, only one of which is a DIP. This will always be controversial,
and in discussions (last month?) we suggested the diagrams use "IP" instead
of DIP to accommodate all packages delivered to consumers.  This dichotomy
should also be mentioned in Section 2.1 to reflect the distinction between
true archived materials (i.e. derived directly from AIPs) and ancillary data
such as search request responses, scheduling dialogs, or Report Assistance
delivered to the Consumer. Of course you could leave such dialog or
ancillary interactions outside of the OAISIF altogether, and leave those
things to implementers to solve on their own. I'm not sure they'd
necessarily impact the preservation life cycle.
2.	(I know this is a real nit) But book dates, in the footer and on the
title page don't match.  
3.	Figure 3 Caption (sound it out)

 

On 2020-10-07 10:11 PM, kearneysolutions at gmail.com
<mailto:kearneysolutions at gmail.com>  wrote:

Steve, attached are my draft additions to explain the boundaries of
normative material in the architecture, as we discussed during the telecon
on Tuesday.  I turned track changes on, and you'll find updates only in
sections 1.1 and 1.5.  

 

All, if you're submitting comments/redlines to Steve, remember to turn on
Track Changes first. they're off by default in the copy that Steve sent.  

 

   -=- Mike

 

Mike Kearney

Huntsville, Alabama, USA 

 

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Subject: Re: [Moims-dai] Component Diagram and Updated Book

 

Hi all,

 

Attached please find the latest version of the book in both .doc and .pdf
formats.

 

Thank you,

Steve

 

 

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Subject: FW: Component Diagram and Updated Book

 

Hi all,

 

David mentioned that he will not be able to attend tomorrow's meeting of the
MOIMS Data Archive Interoperability group and asked that we continue
discussion of the OAIS-IF. 

 

In preparation, attached are the latest Component diagrams and an updated
version of the book. To help focus the discussion I like to review the set
of elements to determine whether we have the minimal set needed. 

 

Thanks,

Steve





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