[Moims-dai] Reminder of Skype call tomorrow (replaces the Webex call)

[Engel, Felix]

Hi,

I did some modifications, and added some annotations to the text. Please have a look if these should be considered. E.g.

*         I guess only those concepts should start with a capital letter that are introduced in section 1.6

*         There a lots of double whitespaces "  " in section 6.1.6 (but in the whole document as well)

*         Section 6.1.6

o   Modified first sentence

o   Proposed a modification of last paragraph P 6-10, that introduces inner and outer OAIS, as used in the reminder of the section (maybe helpful?)

All the best
Felix

From: MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> On Behalf Of John Garrett
Sent: Dienstag, 2. Oktober 2018 09:08
To: 'MOIMS-Data Archive Interoperability' <moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: Re: [Moims-dai] Reminder of Skype call tomorrow (replaces the Webex call)

Hi,

Sorry for this late contribution.
It seemed to some of us that Section 6 wasn't quite on the right track.  I  took a crack at reorganizing a bit and hopefully simplifying it.
I think it remains closer to the starting text from OAIS 2012, but also adds in some of the new concepts.
I've also eliminated some of more detailed, recursive OO-IO examples that I thought might be causing some of the disagreement.

I don't know if this will help, but I'm offering it as possibility.  We can discuss it on the telecon later today if others think it useful.

Peace and joy,
-JOhn

From: MOIMS-DAI [mailto:moims-dai-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org] On Behalf Of David Giaretta
Sent: Monday, October 1, 2018 9:16 AM
To: MOIMS-DAI List <moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org<mailto:moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org>>
Subject: [Moims-dai] Reminder of Skype call tomorrow (replaces the Webex call)


Meeting: 10:00 Tuesday (EST) (1500 UK time, 1600 European time)



John has made a group on Skype for us to chat, share and collaborate.



Join it by clicking the link:

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This is the last open issue we need to resolve to finalise the draft.

1)      http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=135 (Outer OAIS - Inner OAIS model for Distributed digital preservation) was re-opened for further discussion.
As discussed 2 weeks ago at the MOIMS-DAI Skype call, I took the ideas I had previously circulated and have restructured the text in section 6 in order to clarify the relationship between the different arrangements of organisations described in this section, which was one of the main talking points in previous calls. See http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=50
You will see that it is mostly a rearrangement of text existing in the draft, with some additional "glue" to try to show the relationship between the different options.
I moved the text from the last subsection into an earlier subsection and replaced it with a brief discussion about Technical Issues about interoperability. It may be useful to expand that a little in order to link to the document Steve is preparing.
              Mark sent his comments on this proposed restructuring of section 6 on 25th Sept.

There was also an action on me to suggest a clarification about Representation Information, which I attach, and which I hope we can discuss.

..David

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