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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE" style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Hi,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE" style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">I did some modifications, and added some annotations to the text. Please have a look if these should be considered. E.g.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">I guess only those concepts should start with a capital letter that are introduced in section 1.6<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">There a lots of double whitespaces “ ” in section 6.1.6 (but in the whole document as well)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Section 6.1.6<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Modified first sentence<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Proposed a modification of last paragraph P 6-10, that introduces inner and outer OAIS, as used in the reminder of the section (maybe helpful?)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">All the best<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Felix<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US"> MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>John Garrett<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Dienstag, 2. Oktober 2018 09:08<br>
<b>To:</b> 'MOIMS-Data Archive Interoperability' <moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Moims-dai] Reminder of Skype call tomorrow (replaces the Webex call)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Hi,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Sorry for this late contribution.
<br>
It seemed to some of us that Section 6 wasn’t quite on the right track. I took a crack at reorganizing a bit and hopefully simplifying it.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">I think it remains closer to the starting text from OAIS 2012, but also adds in some of the new concepts.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">I’ve also eliminated some of more detailed, recursive OO-IO examples that I thought might be causing some of the disagreement.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">I don’t know if this will help, but I’m offering it as possibility. We can discuss it on the telecon later today if others think it useful.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Peace and joy,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">-JOhn<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US"> MOIMS-DAI [<a href="mailto:moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org">mailto:moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>David Giaretta<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, October 1, 2018 9:16 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> MOIMS-DAI List <<a href="mailto:moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Moims-dai] Reminder of Skype call tomorrow (replaces the Webex call)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">Meeting: 10:00 Tuesday (EST) (1500 UK time, 1600 European time)
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US">John has made a group on Skype for us to chat, share and collaborate.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US">Join it by clicking the link:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US"><a href="https://join.skype.com/ykyu5SIPhSnD">https://join.skype.com/ykyu5SIPhSnD</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US">*Don't have Skype yet? Download it before you join
<a href="https://www.skype.com">https://www.skype.com</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">This is the last open issue we need to resolve to finalise the draft.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US"><a href="http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=135">http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=135</a> (Outer OAIS – Inner OAIS model for Distributed digital preservation) was re-opened for further discussion.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt">As discussed 2 weeks ago at the MOIMS-DAI Skype call, I took the ideas I had previously circulated and have restructured the text in section 6 in order to clarify the relationship between the different arrangements
of organisations described in this section, which was one of the main talking points in previous calls. See
<a href="http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=50">http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=50</a>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt">You will see that it is mostly a rearrangement of text existing in the draft, with some additional “glue” to try to show the relationship between the different options.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt">I moved the text from the last subsection into an earlier subsection and replaced it with a brief discussion about Technical Issues about interoperability. It may be useful to expand that a little in order to
link to the document Steve is preparing.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> Mark sent his comments on this proposed restructuring of section 6 on 25<sup>th</sup> Sept.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">There was also an action on me to suggest a clarification about Representation Information, which I attach, and which I hope we can discuss.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">..David<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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