[Moims-dai] Finalizing the OAIS translation

[John Garrett]

Hi Claire,

 

I agree with Mark.

I would choose to drop the capitalization where he suggested options of adding a term or dropping capitalization.

 

Peace and joy,

-JOhn

 

 

From: MOIMS-DAI [mailto:moims-dai-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org] On Behalf Of Mark Conrad
Sent: Thursday, July 13, 2017 9:54 AM
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Subject: Re: [Moims-dai] Finalizing the OAIS translation

 

Hi Claire,

 

Thank you so much for your work on this important project.

 

-          In section 6.1.3, the terms Local Consumer, Global Consumer and Common Catalog with upper case but these terms are not in the Terminology section. Should we add them into the new version of the OAIS document ?

 

***In my opinion - others may differ - we should either add these to the Terminology section of the revised document we are currently working on or drop the capitalization. I will add this point to the review.oais.info <http://review.oais.info>  site.

 

-          Also in section 6.1.3, the sentence : “This OAIS name could be formatted according to a standard that gives the Customer or other Federation members the information needed”, do you Consumer instead ?

 

***In my opinion - others may differ - we should change Customer to Consumer in the revised document we are currently working on. I will add this point to the review.oais.info <http://review.oais.info>  site.

 

-          Section 6.1.3, in the note “Extra access ports are added to the diagram to illustrate the potentially differing views of each consumer community.” Referring to the diagram 6-3, do the extra access ports refer to “Acc” ports linked to the Local and Global Consumers ?

 

***I believe that is correct.

 

 

Mark




Mark Conrad
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On Thu, Jul 13, 2017 at 5:49 AM, Caillet Claire <Claire.Caillet at cnes.fr <mailto:Claire.Caillet at cnes.fr> > wrote:

Hello,

 

We are now in the last days of work on the OAIS translation and we have some new points/confirmation to ask :

-          In section 6.1.3, the terms Local Consumer, Global Consumer and Common Catalog with upper case but these terms are not in the Terminology section. Should we add them into the new version of the OAIS document ?

-          Also in section 6.1.3, the sentence : “This OAIS name could be formatted according to a standard that gives the Customer or other Federation members the information needed”, do you Consumer instead ?

-          Section 6.1.3, in the note “Extra access ports are added to the diagram to illustrate the potentially differing views of each consumer community.” Referring to the diagram 6-3, do the extra access ports refer to “Acc” ports linked to the Local and Global Consumers ?

 

Thanks again for all your help in our translation.

Regards,

_______________________________________________________________________

Claire Caillet

CNES

DNO/ISA/VIP

 

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e-mail : claire.caillet at cnes.fr <mailto:claire.caillet at cnes.fr> 

 

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