[Moims-dai] IPELTU comments

[Robert R Downs]

All -

Please find the attached file containing additional suggested edits and 
share any suggestions for improvement.

Thanks,

Bob

On 10/3/2016 8:30 AM, D or C Sawyer wrote:
> All,
>
> I had made some suggested edits in my version of the document, through 
> section 2, and I’ve incorporated them into John’s version. I think the 
> main issue, which seems to be John’s as well, is how the document is 
> currently addressing ‘areas’.  It is attached below.
>
> Cheers-
> Don
>
> On Oct 3, 2016, at 12:26 AM, John Garrett <garrett at his.com 
> <mailto:garrett at his.com>> wrote:
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>> Hi all,
>> I’ve attached a marked up version of the current draft of the 
>> Information Preservation Enabling Long-Term Use (IPELTU).  We’re 
>> making good progress on this approach for the document, but we have 
>> to start spending more time on this to move it forward.  As is to be 
>> expected, the earlier parts of the document are filling in nicely, 
>> but we need to continue onto the later sections of the document.  
>> Hopefully, we can all take a look and provide comments over the next 
>> couple of weeks so we can make some significant progress on this at 
>> the upcoming CCSDS technical meeting in 2 weeks.
>> Talk to you at the telecon on Tuesday.
>> Wishing you prosperity and peace,
>> -JOhn
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