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Please find the attached file containing additional suggested edits
and share any suggestions for improvement.<br>
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Thanks,<br>
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Bob<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 10/3/2016 8:30 AM, D or C Sawyer
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<div>I had made some suggested edits in my version of the
document, through section 2, and I’ve incorporated them into
John’s version. I think the main issue, which seems to be John’s
as well, is how the document is currently addressing ‘areas’.
It is attached below.</div>
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<div>Cheers-</div>
<div>Don</div>
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<div>On Oct 3, 2016, at 12:26 AM, John Garrett <<a
moz-do-not-send="true" href="mailto:garrett@his.com"><a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a></a>>
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font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Hi all,<o:p></o:p></div>
<div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt;
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div>
<div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt;
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">I’ve attached a
marked up version of the current draft of the
Information Preservation Enabling Long-Term Use
(IPELTU). We’re making good progress on this approach
for the document, but we have to start spending more
time on this to move it forward. As is to be
expected, the earlier parts of the document are
filling in nicely, but we need to continue onto the
later sections of the document. Hopefully, we can all
take a look and provide comments over the next couple
of weeks so we can make some significant progress on
this at the upcoming CCSDS technical meeting in 2
weeks.<o:p></o:p></div>
<div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt;
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div>
<div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt;
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Talk to you at the
telecon on Tuesday.<o:p></o:p></div>
<div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt;
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div>
<div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt;
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Wishing you
prosperity and peace,<o:p></o:p></div>
<div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt;
font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">-JOhn<o:p></o:p></div>
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