[Moims-dai] RE: PAIS GB (word version)

[Boucon Daniele]

Dear Daniele,

I've seen your question to Gael concerning the license.

Except for this previous comment that is still open, please find enclosed the updated version of the GB, including:

·         The answer to your comments (enclosed and highlighted inside the comments)

·         The updates with revision marks in the text.

Is that ok for you?

Regards,

Daniele

De : Mario.Merri at esa.int [mailto:Mario.Merri at esa.int]
Envoyé : mercredi 4 novembre 2015 16:35
À : Boucon Daniele
Cc : moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org
Objet : Re: PAIS GB (word version)

Dear Daniele,

I have been able to just browse through the documents. I find the document very comprehensive although extremely complicated. The examples are very detailed, but massive and quite discouraging if one does not have real need to implement it, but wants just to understand what PAIS is about. If this is the tutorial, I do not want even to think what the PAIS BB is!. Maybe, at least the initial section should be kept very simple without digging into the details. In this context, it is also very difficult to review as this can be done only by experts. Therefore, I will have to thrust the expertise in your WG.

Another issue is the license of the ESA SIP Builder SW. I am not sure if this license is legal for ESA. Who has agreed to this from ESA? Here we are talking about world-wide distribution and ESA has rules for this. Have these rules been applied?

I have raised a few comment in the document, although the ones above are the major ones.

Regards,

__Mario




From:        "Boucon Daniele" <Daniele.Boucon at cnes.fr<mailto:Daniele.Boucon at cnes.fr>>
To:        "Mario.Merri at esa.int<mailto:Mario.Merri at esa.int>" <Mario.Merri at esa.int<mailto:Mario.Merri at esa.int>>
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Date:        16/10/2015 10:45
Subject:        PAIS GB (word version)
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And now the word version,

Regards,

Daniele
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