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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Dear Daniele,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I’ve seen your question to Gael concerning the license.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Except for this previous comment that is still open, please find enclosed the updated version of the GB, including:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">The answer to your comments (enclosed and highlighted inside the comments)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">The updates with revision marks in the text.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Is that ok for you?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Daniele<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">De :</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Mario.Merri@esa.int [mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int]
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<b>Envoyé :</b> mercredi 4 novembre 2015 16:35<br>
<b>À :</b> Boucon Daniele<br>
<b>Cc :</b> moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org<br>
<b>Objet :</b> Re: PAIS GB (word version)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Dear Daniele,</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">I have been able to just browse through the documents. I find the document very comprehensive although extremely complicated. The examples are very detailed, but massive and quite discouraging
 if one does not have real need to implement it, but wants just to understand what PAIS is about. If this is the tutorial, I do not want even to think what the PAIS BB is!. Maybe, at least the initial section should be kept very simple without digging into
 the details. In this context, it is also very difficult to review as this can be done only by experts. Therefore, I will have to thrust the expertise in your WG.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Another issue is the license of the ESA SIP Builder SW. I am not sure if this license is legal for ESA. Who has agreed to this from ESA? Here we are talking about world-wide distribution and ESA
 has rules for this. Have these rules been applied?</span> <br>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">I have raised a few comment in the document, although the ones above are the major ones.
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Regards,</span> <br>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">__Mario</span> <br>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F">From:        </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">"Boucon Daniele" <<a href="mailto:Daniele.Boucon@cnes.fr">Daniele.Boucon@cnes.fr</a>></span>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F">To:        </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">"<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>" <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>></span>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F">Cc:        </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">"<a href="mailto:moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org</a>></span>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F">Date:        </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">16/10/2015 10:45</span>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F">Subject:        </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">PAIS GB (word version)</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">And now the word version,</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Regards,</span>
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