[Css-csts] Additional comments on Framework R-0.17

[John Pietras]

Yves,

I've had a chance to do a bit more reviewing of the CSTS Framework
R-0.17 document. I've added new mark-up comments to the zipped copy
"CSTSProceduresDefinitionRecommendation0.17-JPcmtsR1.zip", which I've
uploaded to the CWE > Cross Support Services Area (CSS)
<http://cwe.ccsds.org/css>  > Documents
<http://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/Forms/AllItems.aspx>  > CSS-CSTS
<http://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/Forms/AllItems.aspx?RootFolder=%2Fcss%2Fd
ocs%2FCSS%2DCSTS>  > CWE Private
<http://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/Forms/AllItems.aspx?RootFolder=%2Fcss%2Fd
ocs%2FCSS%2DCSTS%2FCWE%20Private>  > SLE Toolkit Procedures folder at
URL 

http://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-CSTS/CWE%20Private/SLE%20Toolkit%20Pro
cedures/CSTSProceduresDefinitionRecommendation0.17-JPcmtsR1.zip

(also at http://tinyurl.com/Framework0-17-JP-R1)

 

New comments are on pages 2-9, 2-14, 4-1, 4-2, 4-3, 4-17, 4-23, 4-24,
4-28, 4-32, 4-33, 4-37, 4-38, 4-44, 4-48, 4-49, 4-55, 4-56. 

 

These are in addition to the comments that I made in my first set, which
were on page: 1-7 through 1-9, 2-2, 2-3, 3-22, 4-30, 4-32, C-1, and C-2.
(I also noted that the title in the header of the pages has
"Specifications" (plural), but the title of the Recommended Standard is
"Specification" (singular)). 

 

I'm looking forward to talking with you (all) tomorrow.

 

Best regards,

John

 

 

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