[Css-csts] CCSDS Configuration Query & Unbuffered Data Delivery - Comments

[Yves.Doat at esa.int]

Dear François,
I uploaded to the CCSDS Web Site the configuration query (CSTS
Information-Query Procedure_04_10.2007 YD.doc) and the unbuffered data
delivery (CSTS Unbuffered Data-Delivery Procedure_04_10.2007 YD.doc) updated
with my comments.
Please find below a summary of my comments:
- I reformatted the text to fit with the main document (e.g. I removed the
blank lines, I changed the header to fit with the final location);
- I reformatted the state table of the configuration query considering it is
now a stateless procedure;
- I added to the unbuffered data delivery the 'unbind' and 'protocol abort'
as discussed during our last meeting;

Could you please have a look to the proposed updates and let me know your
opinion. In case of problems we could discuss on the telephone (at the latest
mid-November during our teleconference).

I did not touch Cyclic Report procedure. My main comments are the following:
   The data parameter of the TRANSFER-DATA is refined. The way the refinement
   is introduced is unclear and we should explain that the TRANSFER-DATA is
   refined and then explain how.
   The sections should be aligned to the numbering of the main document
   (using the same numbering as the two other commented procedures)

Best regards
Yves DOAT
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