[CMC] Re: Moving Forward - CCSDS [Version-2]

[Narita, Kaneaki]

In addition,
(5) On page. 4, 2nd sub-bullet of 2nd bullet
   "Delayed/Disrupted network" was added
 
Best Regards,
Narita


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$BAw?.<T!'(B"Narita, Kaneaki" <narita.kaneaki at jaxa.jp>
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$BAw?.F|;~!'(BMon, 17 Nov 2008 17:41:47 +0900 (JST)
$B7oL>!'(BMoving Forward - CCSDS [Version-2]

> Dear CMC and IOAG member:
> I am distributing CCSDS presentation: Version-2.
> I appreciate your comments, suggestions, and clarifications 
> through on-line or off-line.
> The followings are the major update points.
> (1) Added "IOAG" foot-note.(JAXA logo is only page. 1)
> (2) Modify page. 7 figure: Many comments were generated,
>     I hope this version goes the highest common factor.
> (3) Modify the last bullet on page. 2.
>     changes to more meaningful text
> (4) Re-shaffle the contents within on page 3.
>     Only consider the presentations strategy.
> I appreciate your continous and powerful support.
> Best Regards,
> Narita