[CESG] RE: [Smwg] Re: My comments of latest draft of charter

[Barkley, Erik J (3170)]

CESG Membership -- this is a draft product, in progress, that will be undergoing revisions as result of a WG teleconference held earlier today. As such I don't believe it is well advised to review this at this time in preference to allowing the WG to complete its efforts and review the charter when revisions, etc in progress have been completed.  This is projected to be done in approximately 6 weeks (allowing for summer holidays,etc.)  Having said that, comments are welcomed but be advised they may very well be overcome by events.

Best regards,

-Erik

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CESG: comments?

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Subject: [Smwg] Re: My comments of latest draft of charter

Colin,

if I may add to your comments, I find the charter's Goals very fuzzy and overlapping with the SM&C. For instance, the SM&C WG has already defined an "extensible framework ...". So why not re-using it? and why not mentioning it in the section "Survey of Similar Work Undertaken in Other Bodies"?

Either it is very clear that you are addressing a very limited and confined set of services which (for some reason that you will have to explain) requires a specific service framework or we are again going in the direction of creating overlapping (and possibly contradicting) standards.

Ciao

__Mario

                                                                                                                                        
  From:       Colin Haddow/esoc/ESA                                                                                                      
                                                                                                                                         
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  Cc:         Mario Merri/esoc/ESA at ESA, Nestor Peccia/esoc/ESA at ESA, Margherita di Giulio/esoc/ESA at ESA                                    
                                                                                                                                         
  Date:       18/07/2012 16:06                                                                                                           
                                                                                                                                         
  Subject:    My comments of latest draft of charter                                                                                     
Dear all (in particular Erik),
                                                     please find attached my comments on the latest draft of the new charter.

Cheers for now,

Colin

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