[Ccsds-omg-liaison] RE: AB Homework: SOLM FTF Report (dtc/12-02-12..15)

[VINCENT Hugues]

Dear Brad and all,

Few points which still need to be dealt with.

Inventory:
As far as I can understand this, machine readable URI should be as .../SOLM/20120201/... 

Issue 17102
	- Please replace in the report "6.6.10" with "6.5.10" and "6.6.11" with "6.5.11"


Best regards,
Hugues



> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Kizzort, Brad [mailto:bkizzort at harris.com]
> Envoyé : lundi 12 mars 2012 22:08
> À : VINCENT Hugues; solm-ftf at omg.org
> Cc : space at omg.org; ab at omg.org
> Objet : RE: AB Homework: SOLM FTF Report (dtc/12-02-12..15)
> 
> Thank you for your review and good catches, Hugues.
> 
> Juergen will be posting new versions of the following three documents
> for the SOLM FTF report:
> 	1. Final Report - 	dtc/12-03-01
> 	2. Inventory -		dtc/12-03-02
> 	3. Spec w/change bars -	dtc/12-03-03
> 
> I added the specification changes to the resolution description of
> 17101 and 17102 in the final report.  The resolution description was
> drafted to describe the model impact, which was the primary change.
> When the figure and text ripple effects were discovered, they were
> added to the resolution without updating the resolution description.
> This update corrects that deficiency in the final report.
> 
> The inventory was updated to eliminate the duplicate entry for the
> metamodel and for the updated document numbers above.
> 
> I added issue tags to the Specification w/change bars.  Most of the
> tags could be inserted prior to the paragraph (or figure) containing
> the change, but in the case of tables, several of the issue tags were
> inserted after the appended rows rather than splitting the table.
> 
> Brad Kizzort
> solm-ftf at omg.org
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: VINCENT Hugues [mailto:hugues.vincent at thalesgroup.com]
> Sent: Wednesday, February 29, 2012 7:06 AM
> To: solm-ftf at omg.org
> Cc: space at omg.org; ab at omg.org
> Subject: AB Homework: SOLM FTF Report (dtc/12-02-12..15)
> 
> Dear all,
> 
> 
> Here are my first comments as AB reviewer of the "SOLM FTF Report"
> (dtc/12-02-12..15)
> 
> 
> Inventory file:
> 	- Metamodel for SOLM is written twice
> 	- Metamodel URL:
> http://www.omg.org/spec/SOLM/20120201/SOLMetamodel.xmi
> 	- All Machine-consumables URL:
> 		http://www.omg.org/spec/SOLM/20120201/XXX
> 
> 
> Specification:
> 	- You're supposed to put "issue tags" before each modification in
> the "with
> 	  change bars" document. The form of such a tag is:
> 		a line
> 		Issue <Number>: <Text of the issue>
> 		a line
> 	  You can have a look at ptc/11-10-06 for instance
> 
> 
> Issue 17101
> 	- "This resolution applies to the non-normative model as captured
> in Enterprise
> 	Architect and results in changes to the normative XMI model when
> it is exported. The
> 	"revised text" below illustrates the impact on the XMI model"
> 		this is not the only modified thing since there is a change
> in a figure
> 
> 
> Issue 17102
> 	- "This resolution applies to the non-normative model as captured
> in Enterprise
> 	Architect and results in changes to the normative XMI model when
> it is exported. The
> 	"revised text" below shows the impact on the XMI model"
> 		this is not the only thing since there is figures and texts
> modification
> 	- "6.6.10" -> "6.5.10"
> 	- "6.6.11" -> "6.5.11"
> 
> 
> These modifications of the report document don't require a new vote
> from the FTF.
> 
> 
> These comments don't preclude any further comments from me or other AB
> members.
> 
> Best regards,
> Hugues VINCENT
> OMG Architecture Board Member
> hugues_vincent (at) omg.org