[Smwg] SACP Book Concept Paper

[John Pietras]

Dear Marcin,
Attached is a commented copy of your SACP Concept Paper. Overall I think that it is going in the right direction, and my comments focus on just a few points. Unfortunately I won't be participating in the next telecon (well, not so unfortunately, as I'll be on vacation), so I won't be able to join in the discussion then. But I'll be happy to discuss my comments after I get back, if you wish. And perhaps we can arrange to get together when you are here the week before the Darmstadt meeting.

And thanks again for the Cookie Cutter graphic (can we get this adopted as an official CCSDS logo?)

Best regards,
John

From: SMWG <smwg-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> On Behalf Of Marcin.Gnat at dlr.de
Sent: Tuesday, July 16, 2019 12:07 PM
To: erik.j.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov
Cc: smwg at mailman.ccsds.org
Subject: [Smwg] SACP Book Concept Paper

Dear Erik (and SMWG),

See attached. It got a bit lengthy, but I hope I captured what I want to do. Hopefully it fits also to the common understanding we have (because we have it, don't we? ;-)
I'm happy if you shall have any comments or corrections.

I also know it's not yet the perfectly smooth bunch of text, I can iron it later on (and make it for example shorter), but first I want to know if the general content is okay with you.

I'd be also happy if John can drop an eye on that... I hope it's not too messy. By the way, few sections and sentences I just took a freedom to copy out of the TN. I hope this is okay.

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Best regards
Marcin
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