[Sls-rfm] Fw: SOIS-WIR Wireless Proximity Network Communications draft Blue Book

Mon Nov 16 09:34:21 UTC 2020

Dear All,

I have not received any feedback from you. Meanwhile, I read the changes 
myself and therefore have a pretty good understanding of them.

If I do not receive any negative feedback by Nov 18 close of business, I 
would assume that the RFM WG can live with the document as proposed now 
and will inform SOIS-WIR accordingly. Of course, if you are party to the 
Agency Review process also for SOIS area, you may submit your own comments 
during such phase (not started yet.)

Regards, Enrico

From:   Enrico Vassallo/esoc/ESA
To:     sls-rfm at mailman.ccsds.org
Date:   11/11/20 11:02
Subject:        Fw: SOIS-WIR Wireless Proximity Network Communications 
draft Blue Book

Dear All,

I assume you have not received this email since Kevin is not a member of 
the RFM WG. Having checked with the SLS AD, it is confirmed that the email 
was blocked by CCSDS.

Please have a look at the response and let me know if you are happy with 
it (especially, Dennis, Jean-Luc and Wai who provided specific comments).

Note that the SOIS-WIR chair proposes to address additional comments by 
RFM WG during the agency review phase.

Best Regards, Enrico

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From:   "Kevin K Gifford" <kevin.gifford at colorado.edu>
To:     "Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int" <Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int>, 
"sls-rfm at mailman.ccsds.org" <sls-rfm at mailman.ccsds.org>
Cc:     "Jonathan Wilmot" <jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov>, "Ray Wagner" 
<raymond.s.wagner at nasa.gov>, "Lansdowne, Chatwin (JSC-EV811)" 
<chatwin.lansdowne-1 at nasa.gov>, "Cascarano, Brian (ASC/CSA)" 
<brian.cascarano at canada.ca>, "Stephen Braham" <stephen_braham at sfu.ca>, 
"Siddhartha Subray" <Siddhartha.Subray at Colorado.EDU>, "Kevin K Gifford" 
<kevin.gifford at colorado.edu>
Date:   09/11/20 23:11
Subject:        Re: SOIS-WIR Wireless Proximity Network Communications 
draft Blue Book

Dear SLS-RFM Working Group - 

Sincere thanks to the SLS-RFM WG for review of the draft CCSDS 883-0-B-0 
Wireless Proximity Network Communications Blue Book.

The SOIS-WIR WG has reviewed all the SLS-RFM comments and have composed 
dispositions for all comments.

Please find attached two documents:
-- A table-based response to all SLS-RFM comments (v0.10.06.00 SLS-RFM RID 
Table and Responses.docx)
-- The draft BB with the SOIS-WIR proposed updates that address all 
comments from SLS-RFM (v0.10.16.16.09 CCSDS 883-0-BBv1-0 Wireless 
Proximity Network Communications.docx)

The attached Blue Book has Track Changes ON, and the only changes in the 
document are the updates from the SOIS-WIR WG to address/disposition the 
SLS-RFM WG Review Items.  You can simply advance to the changes in the 
Blue Book with the 'Next Change' button where Reviewing.

The primary updates are on page 2-1 and page 2-2, then in Section 2.4.2 
starting on page 2-10 and page 2-11 (this includes the updated Table 2-3).

Thank you again for the thoughtful review and suggestions.  If there are 
any additional inputs from your Working Group, the SOIS-WIR WG will 
address/disposition during the nominal Agency Review Cycle.

Please let me know if any questions or concerns.

Thanks again SLS-RFM!

Kevin

From: Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int <Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int>
Sent: Wednesday, October 28, 2020 7:51 AM
To: Kevin K Gifford <kevin.gifford at colorado.edu>
Cc: Jonathan Wilmot <jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov>; Ray Wagner 
<raymond.s.wagner at nasa.gov>; sls-rfm at mailman.ccsds.org 
<sls-rfm at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: SOIS-WIR Wireless Proximity Network Communications draft Blue 
Book 

Dear Kevin, 

RFM WG has concluded discussions on the SOIS-WIR proxy draft BB. The 
agreed RFM WG position for SOIS-WIR is attached and is identical to the 
draft version submitted by Dennis for advance info. 

The RFM WG is looking forward to receiving SOIS-WIR replies and, if 
requested by your group, is ready to be actively involved in solving some 
of he identified problems. 

Best Regards, Enrico 

From:        "Lee, Dennis K (US 332G)" <dennis.k.lee at jpl.nasa.gov> 
To:        "Kevin K Gifford" <kevin.gifford at colorado.edu>, 
"Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int" <Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int> 
Cc:        "Jonathan Wilmot" <jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov>, "Ray Wagner" 
<raymond.s.wagner at nasa.gov> 
Date:        26/10/20 15:20 
Subject:        RE: RFM Working Group Agenda 

[attachment "Response to SOIS-WIR on CCSDS 883.0-BBv1_draft3.docx" deleted 
by Enrico Vassallo/esoc/ESA] 
Kevin,

Attached is a compilation of the review feedback received from the RFM 
working group on the draft SOIS-WIR Wireless Proximity Network 
Communication Blue Book.  They are mainly focused on revisions to the 
spectrum utilization (section 2.4.2), Table 2-2, and information regarding 
lunar base station density and lunar surface channel models.  Please let 
us know if you have any questions about the RFM feedback.

Thanks,
Dennis 

From: Kevin K Gifford <kevin.gifford at colorado.edu> 
Sent: Tuesday, October 20, 2020 9:00 AM
To: Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int; Lee, Dennis K (US 332G) 
<dennis.k.lee at jpl.nasa.gov>
Cc: Jonathan Wilmot <jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov>; Ray Wagner 
<raymond.s.wagner at nasa.gov>; sls-rfm at mailman.ccsds.org; Kevin K Gifford 
<kevin.gifford at colorado.edu>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: RFM Working Group Agenda

Hi SLS-RFM, Dennis, Enrico - 

@Dennis: Can you please forward the SLS-RFM comments pertaining to the 
SOIS-WIR Wireless Proximity Network Communications draft Blue Book?  The 
SOIS-WIR WG would like to review the SLS-RFM comments.

Sincere thanks for your review efforts and valued inputs.

Kevin

From: Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int <Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int>
Sent: Tuesday, October 20, 2020 8:18 AM
To: Kevin K Gifford <kevin.gifford at colorado.edu>
Cc: Jonathan Wilmot <jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov>; Ray Wagner <
raymond.s.wagner at nasa.gov>; sls-rfm at mailman.ccsds.org <
sls-rfm at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: RFM Working Group Agenda 

Hi Kevin, 

we are fine and hope the same is true for you. 

The RFM WG works with papers submitted two weeks in advance of the meeting 
like other SLS groups. In light of the remote meeting for Fall 2020, we 
did documents review by correspondence. The agenda does not entail a 
physical mtg or videoconf, but just that we work on these issues. 

The WG did review your input and Dennis was about to contact you with our 
findings/recommendations. 

So please refrain from sending us another version. Have first a look at 
our recommendations and let us know what you think and what you could do 
about them. We can still iterate our recommendations with your group, 
though. If you are willing to take on board our requests, we can give you 
a few weeks to carry it out. 

Regards, Enrico 

From:        "Kevin K Gifford" <kevin.gifford at colorado.edu> 
To:        "Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int" <Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int>, 
"Blackwood, Michael D. via CESG-All" <cesg-all at mailman.ccsds.org> 
Cc:        "Ray Wagner" <raymond.s.wagner at nasa.gov>, "Jonathan Wilmot" <
jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov>, "Kevin K Gifford" <kevin.gifford at colorado.edu
> 
Date:        20/10/20 16:05 
Subject:        Re: [Cesg-all] RFM Working Group Agenda 

Hi Enrico - 

I hope all is well for you and that you and your family are healthy! 

I'll send the SOIS-WIR draft Blue Book to you and the SLS-RFM group later 
this week so that you will have the latest version of the document that 
will go through Secretariat publication processing. 

Please let me know if any questions or concerns. 

Thanks. 

Kevin 

From: CESG-All <cesg-all-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> on behalf of 
Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int <Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int>
Sent: Tuesday, October 20, 2020 7:34 AM
To: Blackwood, Michael D. via CESG-All <cesg-all at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: [Cesg-all] RFM Working Group Agenda 

Dear Michael, 
the agenda follows.
Best Regards, Enrico

1. Modulations for high rate uplinks with ranging at 22 GHz 
2. Disposition RIDs concerning CCSDS 401.0-RP-30.1 
3. Update to Draft 23/27 GHz TTFR Recommendation 
4. Update to Draft Flexible Turnaround Ratio Recommendation 
5. Consideration of HOMs for non-EESS missions 
6. Review of Draft Wireless Proximity Network Blue Book (SOIS-WIR) 
7. Impact of VCM to EESS HOMs recommendations 
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