[Sls-mhdc] Agency Review of CCSDS-123.0-B-2 (MHDC-A-1804-1(a))

[Kiely, Aaron B (332B)]

Dear Working Group,

I have uploaded to the CWE the following documents pertaining to the results of agency review of CCSDS-123.0-P-1.1 (the Pink Book for CCSDS-123.0-B-2):
	[1] CWE Private / 123.1-B / AgencyReview / 123x0p11-RIDs-2018.10.03.{docx, pdf}
	[2] CWE Private / 123.1-B / AgencyReview / 123x0p11_marked_up-2018.10.03.{doc, pdf}

Document [1] includes all RIDs arising from agency review, including “informal” ones sent via email rather than via the traditional RID form. For most of these RIDs I have also included my proposed disposition or some comments.

Document [2] is a marked-up version of the Pink Book to indicate proposed edits.

Please note that some of the informal suggestions led to a change shown in [2] but were sufficiently minor that I did not create RID in [1]. Thus, if you only look at [1], you won’t be seeing all of the suggested changes.

I hope you’ll have time to review these documents before the Berlin meeting.

Regards,
Aaron