[SLS-CC] 131.20-O draft Orange Book (SCCC-X) WG review -> Deadline 17 December

Fri Dec 20 15:32:53 UTC 2019

Dear Massimo,

I confirm that my issue has been properly taken care of.

Nice holidays,

Enrico

From:   Massimo Bertinelli/estec/ESA
To:     "Space Link Coding & Synchronization Working Group" 
<sls-cc at mailman.ccsds.org>, Enrico Vassallo/esoc/ESA at ESA
Date:   18/12/2019 12:44
Subject:        Re: [SLS-CC] 131.20-O draft Orange Book (SCCC-X) WG review 
-> Deadline 17 December

Dear all,

following the deadline for the WG review of the SCCC-X draft Orange Book 
(yesterday), you can find the received comments in CWE, at : 
https://tinyurl.com/r2pz4aw
and below for your convenience.

- E. Vassallo
[attachment "enrico.pdf" deleted by Enrico Vassallo/esoc/ESA] 
- C. Dudal
[attachment "SCCC-X_orange_book_cd.pdf" deleted by Enrico 
Vassallo/esoc/ESA] 

ESA (A. Modenini) addressed the comments and provided an updated draft, 
attached here for your convenience (and in CWE at the link above)
[attachment "SCCCX_orangebook_postWG_review.pdf" deleted by Enrico 
Vassallo/esoc/ESA] 
In detail:
-Constellation pictures (128 and 256) re-done, so that they are really 
square (E. Vassallo's comment)
-Replacement of FD code structure (Figure 5-6) with XOR instead of 
Multiplier (A. Modenini's comment) (the editorial change affects the 
sequence after the parallel to serial, now using the proper XOR sign)
-Update of CER results (C. Dudal's comment): thanks to the comment, ESA 
realised that the wrong optimal OBO was reported for 128APSK in the 
Nonlinear numerical results. 
  In the new draft figures and tables are updated with the correct values 
and the trend w.r.t. 64APSK seems fine, showing better results at the 
price of slightly higher OBO. 
  For 256APSK ESA crosschecked and confirmed the results already reported.

For Enrico and Clèment: could you please check if the new draft satisfies 
your requests? With the coming Xmas break, I suppose you may not manage 
easily before...2nd week of January?
I will wait for your feedback by then (10th January, if you can make it 
earlier it's even better obviously) and proceed with the processing 
(depending on your answers).

Best regards,
Massimo

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Massimo Bertinelli
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ESA/Estec

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From:   Massimo.Bertinelli at esa.int
To:     "Space Link Coding & Synchronization Working Group" 
<sls-cc at mailman.ccsds.org>
Cc:     Enrico.Vassallo at esa.int
Date:   05/11/2019 15:34
Subject:        [SLS-CC] 131.20-O draft Orange Book (SCCC-X) WG review -> 
Deadline 17 December
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Dear colleagues, 

ESA (Andrea) just provided an updated version of the SCCC-X (131.20-O) 
Orange Book, including the simulation results (annex), as agreed in 
Darmstadt (AI_19_11 in the minutes). 
With this message, I would like to start the WG review. 
Similarly to the on-going review of the DVB-S2X Orange Book, your comments 
are expected by in 6 weeks, with deadline 17 December. 
As for other WG reviews, we don't have a standard format for the comments. 
You can use the standard CCSDS RID format used for Agency Review, if you 
wish so, but you are not 
obliged to do so. 
Please address the comments to Andrea (andrea.modenini at esa.int) and 
myself, we will take care of collecting them. 
If you wish, you can also use the following CWE area to leave your 
comments (in that case I would appreciate if you let me know) 

https://tinyurl.com/y2q7t4po 

Best regards, 
Massimo 

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ESA/Estec

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