[Sea-sec] Updates to the draft Sec WG Yellow Book on cloud testing

Brandon T. Bailey Brandon.T.Bailey at nasa.gov
Thu Sep 21 18:14:45 UTC 2017

I believe I addressed everything Peter had identified.

I consider this the best I can do ☺

Enjoy. Hope it can get through review and approved by or at Nov meetings.

Brandon Bailey
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From: Shames, Peter M (312B) [mailto:peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov]
Sent: Thursday, May 18, 2017 3:32 PM
To: Brandon T. Bailey
Cc: SEA-Sec; Gilles Moury
Subject: Updates to the draft Sec WG Yellow Book on cloud testing
Importance: High

Hi Guys,

I've just read through the draft Yellow Book on cloud testing that Gilles sent along (again).  I think it is in pretty good shape, but it does still have a number of rough edges.  Most of the editorial stuff, formatting, figure headings, page numbering etc we can expect Tom Gannett to deal with.

Here is my list of the things I'd like you guys to fix in order to make Tom's Job easier.

SecWG to provide
All acronyms spelled out
Annex with all acronyms
List of references
Requested updates to figures and text

Tom Gannett to provide
Table of contents
Table of figures
Page numbers
Header & footer

I think you will find these items pretty easily in the text, I tried to mark them so you could find them.  Other text I just edited in place myself.  With track changes you should be able to find them and ensure that I did not screw up any of your intended content.

Please fix this stuff and send it back to me and I'll then forward to Tom for final prep and then CESG for approval to publish.

Thanks, Peter

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