[Sea-sa] SEA SAWG proposed edits to the SOIS document, CCSDS 870.10-Y-1, MO Services and SOIS Electronic Data Sheets

[Shames, Peter M (312B)]

Hi Sam,

This came today, but there was no attachment …

Thanks, Peter



From: Sam Cooper <sam at brightascension.com>
Date: Thursday, February 21, 2019 at 12:53 AM
To: Peter Shames <Peter.M.Shames at jpl.nasa.gov>, Mario Merri <Mario.Merri at esa.int>, "Mehran.Sarkarati at esa.int" <Mehran.Sarkarati at esa.int>, Roger Thompson <roger.s.thompson at btinternet.com>, Dan Smith <danford.s.smith at nasa.gov>, "Wilmot, Jonathan J. (GSFC-5820)" <Jonathan.J.Wilmot at NASA.gov>, "Rakow, Glenn P. (GSFC-5610)" <glenn.p.rakow at nasa.gov>, Richard Melvin <Richard.Melvin at scisys.co.uk>
Cc: SEA-SA <sea-sa at mailman.ccsds.org>, CCSDS Engineering Steering Group - CESG Exec <cesg at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: Re: SEA SAWG proposed edits to the SOIS document, CCSDS 870.10-Y-1, MO Services and SOIS Electronic Data Sheets

Sending again...


On 13/02/2019 09:37, Sam Cooper wrote:
HI Peter,

Thank you fro taking the time to lead this activity, I've reviewed the red marked version of the document (I hope that was the correct one to review).

I've attached my commented and change tracked version for you, it seems like a real step forward and only gets a little confused in section 5 (easily rectified I think) and a little "personal" in section 6.

Best regards,
Sam.

On 09/02/2019 01:04, Shames, Peter M (312B) wrote:
Dear All,

As reported during the CESG Telecon on 7 Feb 2019, the Systems Engineering Area (SEA), using resources of the Systems Architecture Working Group (SAWG), has completed a review of the SOIS document, CCSDS 870.10-Y-1, MO Services and SOIS Electronic Data Sheets and proposed a set of updates to resolve differences of opinion between SOIS and MOIMS and clarify the relationships.  This result was derived using meeting and email discussions within the SAWG and particularly with representatives of the two different points of view (Roger Thompson and Ramon Krosley) and the original author of the document (Richard Melvin).  Before sending this document out more widely these parties were polled and they concurred in this release, with two minor issues noted.  Those issues have been dealt with in this version.

Three files are attached:

1)      A "clean" version with changes accepted, but revised text left in red

2)      A raw version with all of the tracked changes visible

3)      A spreadsheet extracted from the marked up PDF files, along with the audit trail of discussions leading to resolution

Since this is, in effect, a cross-area "working group" of sorts I would like to ask all of those who have a stake in this to review the document and provide feedback in two weeks, by 22 Feb 2019.  I'd like to use a consensus process over email and am hoping we can wrap this up quickly.  We will still need to process the final result through the CESG for approval to publish.

Thanks, Peter




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