[Moims-sc] Draft MPDS Blue Book and XML Specification for WG review

[Coelho, César]

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Hi All,

The latest version of the book already looks quite good.
Please find attached my comments on top of Pete's comments.

Best regards,
César Coelho

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Thanks Dominik, and everyone else who worked on this.

Personally speaking I think the examples that have been added help a lot to explain the thinking behind the theory for potential users like myself.  The fact we've stripped it back to essentially three use cases I also think, for a first version, will hopefully encourage people to consider adopting it for inter-operability since they should be able to envisage implementing it practically without lots of effort.

I don't have any more significant comments.  I read it through (focussing on the ~ first half) and only found a couple of very minor editorials.

Thanks,
Pete

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Dear Working Group Members,

See attached Mission Product Distribution Services draft book, as well as linked XML spec for your review:
https://github.com/ccsdsmo/xml-service-specifications/blob/b19689c6d2b9eea1a335c3423738ba1d97652099/xml-ccsds-mo-prototypes/src/main/resources/xml/area006-v001-Mission-Product-Distribution.xml<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/github.com/ccsdsmo/xml-service-specifications/blob/b19689c6d2b9eea1a335c3423738ba1d97652099/xml-ccsds-mo-prototypes/src/main/resources/xml/area006-v001-Mission-Product-Distribution.xml__;!!AaIhyw!u7LpSxDb3gFOFO5sRR4DqwKK1KGhe3mEXOjr-QZ7kGDLVJAY9YNb2a6tkJo-cMSmy31557qXrQJH4aC2LKvVMpQ$>
If possible, please let me know your feedback by Friday 23rd EOB so I can process it by our meeting on the 27th.

Changes made by me to the original XML generated by Roger<*%09https:/github.com/ccsdsmo/xml-service-specifications/commit/b19689c6d2b9eea1a335c3423738ba1d97652099>:

  *   Renamed MPDS to MPD - we do not say "Services" in other area names, but please correct me if this is wrong.
  *   Fixed XML syntax:
     *   "M&C" to "M&C"
     *   Removed Windows CR characters

For your convenience, I have created MO Viewer mpds branch, which includes also the past 2 proposed specs in case you are more familiar with these.
https://esa.github.io/mo.viewer.web/?u=MPD&b=mpds<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/esa.github.io/mo.viewer.web/?u=MPD&b=mpds__;!!AaIhyw!u7LpSxDb3gFOFO5sRR4DqwKK1KGhe3mEXOjr-QZ7kGDLVJAY9YNb2a6tkJo-cMSmy31557qXrQJH4aC2sojLQwc$>
FYI areas "MDP" and "distribution" are the old specs, while "MPD" is the new one.

Best regards,
Dominik

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Ground Segment Systems and Cybersecurity Engineering Section (OPS-GAE)

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