[MOIMS-NAV-EXEC] Draft ODM v2.39ab Review Comments

[Berry, David S (US 3920)]

Dan:

"At long last" (to borrow a phrase from you), attached are my comments on the P2.39 version of the ODM. I know I told you I'd be done by 05/01/2020, but just couldn't get it done... Apologies.

NOTE: I reviewed all sections with the exception of Section 8 (I'm waiting for OCM to crystallize, and also a discussion with you about the "complex structure lines, which I propose to do after the virtual Spring Meetings), Annex A (can be done later, but it's on my list, again waiting for final OCM content), and Annex J (waiting to see how references to ICD play out...).

Also, I put some comments in red text at the top of the form where you indicated you were waiting for input from me...

Sorry for delay,
David


From: MOIMS-NAV-EXEC <moims-nav-exec-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> on behalf of "Oltrogge, Daniel" <doltrogge at agi.com>
Date: Tuesday, January 21, 2020 at 2:59 PM
To: "moims-nav-exec at mailman.ccsds.org" <moims-nav-exec at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] [MOIMS-NAV-EXEC] Draft ODM v2.39ab

Colleagues –

At long last, we have assembled the new draft version of the Orbit Data Message (attached in both “clean” and “track changes” versions).

I also provide the lengthy CRM associated with this version.  You will note that a few comments have not been resolved to our satisfaction, and these have been moved to the top of the CRM document.

In our upcoming group reviews of v2.39, please start with the attached ODMv2.39_Template_CRM document to paste your comments in, first having checked to ensure that the comment you wish to make isn’t already reflected in the prior comments that have been carried over to the top of this new template.

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Dan Oltrogge
Director, Center for Space Standards and Innovation
Analytical Graphics, Incorporated
Voice: 719-482-4552   ҉   E-mail: oltrogge at agi.com<mailto:oltrogge at agi.com>

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