[MOIMS-NAV-EXEC] RE: NHM Version 12 Comments

[Joseph Hashmall]

Thanks. I'll look at them.



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From: "Berry, David S (3920)" <david.s.berry at jpl.nasa.gov>
Date: 09/05/2015 8:18 AM (GMT-08:00)
To: Joseph Hashmall <joseph.hashmall at ai-solutions.com>
Cc: moims-nav-exec at mailman.ccsds.org
Subject: Re: NHM Version 12 Comments


Joe:

Attached are my comments on the NHM White Book 12.  NOTE for other WG members... Joe has received very little commentary on the NHM.  He will soon start preparing an update for consideration at Darmstadt. If you have not yet completed your review assignment, please do so...

Thanks!
David

P.S.:  Regarding your question on the SANA registry and Annex D.  We should have the Annex D as minimal as possible to get the idea across.  If you want to update the table on the SANA, look at http://beta.sanaregistry.org/r/nhm_define_keyword_values/nhm_define_keyword_values.html .  Send your updates to info at sanaregistry.org . They may ask me for my approval, and I'll grant it. When they ask, I'll also mention that while this is still a "candidate" registry (i.e., the underlying standard is not yet approved) you have the authority to request/approve changes to the content.



From: Joseph Hashmall <joseph.hashmall at ai-solutions.com<mailto:joseph.hashmall at ai-solutions.com>>
Date: Saturday, May 23, 2015 at 11:32 AM
To: David Berry <David.S.Berry at jpl.nasa.gov<mailto:David.S.Berry at jpl.nasa.gov>>
Cc: "moims-nav-exec at mailman.ccsds.org<mailto:moims-nav-exec at mailman.ccsds.org>" <moims-nav-exec at mailman.ccsds.org<mailto:moims-nav-exec at mailman.ccsds.org>>
Subject: NHM Version 12


David,


I've finished the NHM version 12 and attached copies.


There are several places in it that need extra scrutiny and probably some additions.


1) I've completely rewritten sections 3 and 5 and they should be examined with care.

2) I've made a stab at putting in Annex A.

    The numbering in the requirement list table is different from what was in the CDM (the model I used) and I don't know it it conforms with the CCSDS requirement for this table.

    ?The column giving references in this table may need to be emmended.  I have not included any references to the XML section and these may need to be added.

3) In Table D-1 I've updated some of the SANA registry items.  The registry should be updated to match the table but I'm not certain how to do this.  Am I authorized to do it directly or do I have to go through some process of getting approval?

4) Although I've updated the Trace column in Table I-1 I have not included any traces to XML portions of the document.


I'll try to send this to the entire working group as well as separately to you but if you don't get two copies then it probably didn't go through to the entire group.  In that case could you please forward it?


Thanks,


Joe


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