[Moims-ipr] FW: Last Communication Re: East Specification

[Nestor.Peccia at esa.int]

 Dear all 9and Denis in perticular)



The ball is in our field. Please proceed such that we can issue the EAST with
the pink sheets.

The Secretariat is waiting Denis'response (see below()



ciao

nestor

"Forrester Gary (BTAS)" <gary.forrester at btas.com>
22/11/2004 09:07 AM EST

To: "Nestor Peccia (ESA)" <Nestor.Peccia at esa.int>
cc:
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Subject: FW: Last Communication Re: East Specification


Nestor,

I asked Steve about the EAST Specification (CCSDS 644).  His email below details
the latest status on the book of which he is aware.



Gary Forrester

Senior Information Engineer

BTAS, Inc.

CCSDS Secretariat Support - NASA

Phone: (931) 425-6475

Fax: (931) 425-6476

Email: gary.forrester at btas.com



"Research is what I'm doing when

I don't know what I'm doing.

                       -Wernher von Braun



From: Stephen Harris [mailto:stephen.harris at btas.com]
Sent: Mon 11/22/2004 8:40 AM
To: Forrester Gary (BTAS)
Subject: Last Communication Re: East Specification


Gary...

Here's my last message to D. Minguillon regarding CCSDS 644.

I sent a review copy to him on 7 September.

For this message to you, I've removed the file I sent back to Denis.  It was
2 Mb.

Stephen L. Harris
Senior Technical Writer
CCSDS Secretariat Support Office
BTAS, Inc.
1 301 474 5424 (office)
1 301 474 5427 (fax)
stephen.harris at btas.com
-----Original Message-----
From: Stephen Harris [mailto:stephen.harris at btas.com]
Sent: Tuesday, September 07, 2004 1:50 PM
To: 'Denis MINGUILLON'
Subject: RE: comments about the book

Denis...

Minor corrections made and I'm sending you the document to check again.

My replies to your notes are embedded below.

Best Regards...

Stephen L. Harris
Project Lead
CCSDS Secretariat Support Office
1 301 474 5424 (office)
1 301 467 5642 (cell)
Stephen.Harris at btas.com


-----Original Message-----
From: Denis MINGUILLON [mailto:Denis.Minguillon at cnes.fr]
Sent: Monday, August 09, 2004 9:37 AM
To: stephen.harris at btas.com
Cc: beatrice.larzul at cnes.fr; Patrick.Mazal at cnes.fr; Arnaud.Lucas at cnes.fr
Subject: comments about the book

Hello again,

It seems you did a good job.
Most of the modifications are OK with me.

I just noticed a few details I mentionned hereafter.


It is probably due to the following new drawing but I noticed that the title
of Figure 20 is separate from the Figure
itself. The same for figure 3.22
[Stephen Harris] In my copy, the figures are with the titles, no separation.
I think we have a Microsft Word version/settings issue here.

Example 3-8
Between VECTOR( 1..100) and (others=>1)
we should find ":=" instead of ":" alone.
[Stephen Harris] Corrected

Just before Figure 3-42 the text is about figure 3-43.
[Stephen Harris] Corrected


In Example 3-11 is the separation between previous text and added new one
provisory? All text should be in the same
frame in final version. The same for example 3-14.
[Stephen Harris] Corrected

Some references to pages are not OK. I suppose this will work once the
modification are validated.
[Stephen Harris] Table of Contents references checked.

In chapter 4 paragraph c you added east_version but not virtual.
Is it because virtual_... could include virtual alone? I would prefer to see
it mentionned too.
[Stephen Harris] I'm not sure what you want done here.  Please extract the
text and send me back what you need.

I have a little problem with two sentences you changed a little bit. I have
to check with my coplleagues. I will send
another message to say OK or not.



Problems related to the graphics :

Figure 3-21 : the characters "" and ":" in the square boxes are not
present.
[Stephen Harris] On my screen, the "" and ":" are in the boxes - Microsoft
again?

Figure 3-43a : It might have a difference between the content of the left
box and the content of the other boxes because
when printing it apears empty (good on screen !!!)

the other ones seem OK.
[Stephen Harris] Works fine at this end.

Thanks again,

Denis





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