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    <p><font color="#ff0000">Under document control, Notes section: </font><br>
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        PAIS should be spelled out</li>
      <li>Action on Annex B should be stated, by for example, replacing
        first sentence with: <br>
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          "ANNEX B from the previous issue <b><i>has been substantially
              rewritten. Previously, it </i></b>described the
          relationship of OAIS to
          other standards; but its contents were <i><b>increasingly</b></i>
          out of date as
          those other standards<i><b> were</b></i><i><b> developed </b></i>along
          different directions and
          timelines as compared to OAIS development."</p>
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    <p><font color="#ff0000">1.4 Conformance, last paragraph, is
        confusing. It might help if we explained the difference between
        normative (1.6.2, 2.3, 4.3) and Mandatory (and do we expect to
        extend 16363 to accommodate all those) :</font>  <br>
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        <div class="moz-cite-prefix">To summarize, Sections 1.6.2, 2.3,
          3.2 and 4.3 are normative and form
          the basis of conformance to this Recommended Practice. All
          other
          sections are informative, but could aid the user in designing
          archives that conform to this Recommended Practice.</div>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">/s/Terry Longstreth<br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2020-09-03 6:00 AM,
      <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a> wrote:<br>
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        <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">The updated and approved
            version of OAIS is at <a
href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/moims/docs/MOIMS-DAI/Draft%20Documents/OAIS%20v3/650x0020_CESG_Approval_Mod-20200901-SEA-approved.doc?Web=0%20"
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            </a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Id appreciate it if
            people could take a look to make sure things are as
            expected.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Then Ill send it on to
            the CCSDS Technical Editor.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">.>David<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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