[Moims-dai] Updated 652x0 Audit Metrics

[garrett at his.com]

Hi all,

 

At last weeks DAI meeting, the DAI WG members reviewed the responses to the
comments made by Peter Shames.

 

While doing so, we realized that several instances of phrases including
"written" still existed in the document.:

We agreed to change many instances of "written" to "documented"   -  in the
definitions, the metrics, the discussion for the metrics, etc.

 

I left uses of "written" in Example sections (probably about a dozen
instances).

 

The updated version is attached.

 

Hope, Health, and Peace,

-JOhn Garrett

garrett at his.com <mailto:garrett at his.com> 

 

 

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