[Moims-dai] I: OAIS-IF Rationale Scenarios and Requirements-20210219 my comments

[Roberta Svanetti]

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Roberta Svanetti
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Da: MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> Per conto di Roberta Svanetti
Inviato: martedì 23 febbraio 2021 15:33
A: MOIMS-Data Archive Interoperability <moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org>
Cc: 'david at giaretta.org' <david at giaretta.org>
Oggetto: [Moims-dai] OAIS-IF Rationale Scenarios and Requirements-20210219 my comments

Hi David, Hi All,



I read the updated version of the document:  https://www.dropbox.com/s/vvjmkh7lkb93gwx/OAIS-IF%20Rationale%20Scenarios%20and%20Requirements-20210219.docx?dl=0 <https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.dropbox.com%2Fs%2Fvvjmkh7lkb93gwx%2FOAIS-IF%2520Rationale%2520Scenarios%2520and%2520Requirements-20210219.docx%3Fdl%3D0&data=04%7C01%7CRoberta.Svanetti%40dedagroup.it%7C4f60d44e57d341e1f2bb08d8d807f158%7Cbbf156d433fa4fee86f62cfcb1359ef0%7C0%7C0%7C637496877230773338%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C2000&sdata=P9qXyfnnGgTQb0B67KB4nkdvJ37rA8c%2BGd3V%2BuGdbFw%3D&reserved=0>  to give a clearer idea of how I I send you in the attached PDF copy, my annotations with  few editorial suggested changes.

Changes in section 2.3 are clear. Up to section 7 the document is very clear and complete.



Kind Regards



Roberta Svanetti

Operations Manager

Deda.Cloud



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