[Moims-dai] Comments on Hemmje-Engel draft os 6.1.5

[Prof. Dr.-Ing. Matthias L. Hemmje]

Dear Terry,

 

thanks for this. I will complete the draft together with Felix in the coming weeks and then put it into the 

discussion system.

 

Best regards

Matthias Hemmje

 

 

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FernUniversität Hagen                     Phone:  +49-2331-987-304
Prof. Dr.-Ing. Matthias L. Hemmje Fax:        +49-2331-987-4487
Universitätsstrasse 1                        Email:    Matthias.Hemmje at fernuni-hagen.de
D-58097 Hagen, Germany               Web:       <http://www.fernuni-hagen.de/> http://www.fernuni-hagen.de/
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From: Terry Longstreth [mailto:terry.longstreth at comcast.net] 
Sent: Sonntag, 26. Februar 2017 07:09
To: Matthias.Hemmje at fernuni-hagen.de
Cc: MOIMS-Data Archive Ingestion <moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: Comments on Hemmje-Engel draft os 6.1.5

 

Moims-Dai, 

I've made 2 or 3 wording changes to Matthias' submission, mostly to English syntax, but the bulk of my contribution is in comments associated with specific spots in the text. 

I use LibreOffice on this machine, so my comments are in Open Document Text (ODT) format.  Word should be able to open it (you might need to use Word's 'recovery' function). 

Terry 


On 2/21/2017 8:38 AM, Prof. Dr.-Ing. Matthias L. Hemmje wrote:

Hi,

 

together with my colleague Felix Engel, I have drafted a new text trying to capture the nature of Virtual Archives with Distributed Functional Areas or Entities. It still needs good example entities and a bit of polishing as it has been derived from 6.1.4 but maybe it is a good starting point for a new 6.1.5 including an additional figure in this area.

 

Maybe we can discuss this in todays meeting.

 

Best regards

Matthias Hemmje

 

 

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FernUniversität Hagen                     Phone:  +49-2331-987-304
Prof. Dr.-Ing. Matthias L. Hemmje Fax:        +49-2331-987-4487
Universitätsstrasse 1                        Email:    Matthias.Hemmje at fernuni-hagen.de <mailto:Matthias.Hemmje at fernuni-hagen.de> 
D-58097 Hagen, Germany               Web:       <http://www.fernuni-hagen.de/> http://www.fernuni-hagen.de/
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