[Moims-dai] RE: draft ILF MB

[david.giaretta at stfc.ac.uk]

Yes this version does seem like a backwards step from my point of view. Still far too much text to agree in the time available.

..David 

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From: Mike Martin [mailto:tahoe_mike at sbcglobal.net] 
Sent: 01 September 2015 20:05
To: John Garrett <garrett at his.com>
Cc: 'Daniele Boucon' <daniele.boucon at cnes.fr>; Giaretta, David (STFC,RAL,RALSP) <david.giaretta at stfc.ac.uk>; 'D or C Sawyer' <Sawyer at acm.org>; 'Robert Downs' <rdowns at ciesin.columbia.edu>; Conway, Esther (STFC,RAL,RALSP) <esther.conway at stfc.ac.uk>; 'MOIMS DAI List' <moims-dai at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: Re: draft ILF MB

Hi John

I had hoped we were done with Figure 2-1 after David removed it from his draft.  The original LTDP figure had potential merit, but it just didn't work.  This version is much more complicated and it still doesn't work.

Thanks, Mike

On 9/1/2015 9:55 AM, John Garrett wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> I'm attaching a new draft of the  ILF/LTDP document.
>
> This document is my attempt to capture the structure agreed to at the 
> last telecon.
>
> I wasn't sure whether the Topics were supposed to go before or after 
> the stages.  It seemed to work better before the stages, so that is 
> where I've included it.  I've just included the topics that David 
> provided in his draft.  We thought they were a good start but they 
> were at different levels and more discussion was needed to firm up the topics.
>
> The stages descriptive text was simply cut and pasted from the 
> previous versions and I only minimally updated it to the current stage 
> names.  We have a lot of work to do to ensure it describes what we 
> want and is consistent.
>
> The activities included in the stages detail were taken from the 
> latest spreadsheet which I sent out.  We've not had much discussion of these.
> I've also added in a placeholder in the activity detail tables to 
> identify concerns for each of our currently identified topics.
>
> Overall this is very rough and the list of topics, the list of 
> activities, and the descriptive text all need a lot of work.
>
> We also need to decide if we are working on the activities and topics 
> in the Word document or as spreadsheets.
>
> Anyway this should complete the my (and Daniele's) AI.
>
> 20150820 AI#2 Update structure as agreed at telecon.
>
> Talk to you in a couple of days.
>
> Live, Laugh, Love, and Work for Peace,
>
> -JOhn
>