[Css-csts] RE : CCSDS Configuration Query & Unbuffered Data Delivery - Comments

[Lassere Francois]

Dear Yves,

Please find my comments about your updates :

- Unbuffered data delivery: a few détails to be in line with the new numbering of the document: 
--> 1.1.2.3 "Data Transferring" rather than "Data Transfer".
--> 1.1.2.4.1 b) to replace 2.3 by 1.1.2.3. Same thing in table 3.2, the data available reference should be replaced by 1.1.2.3.2.

- Information Query: In the provider state table "inactive state" should be replaced by something else, for example: "actions". "Peer abort" has been added to the table and what about "Unbind" ? In table 3-2 référence 2.3 should be removed. 

- Cyclic Report: For refinement introduction of the data parameter I suggest the following sentence (do you think it needs more explanations ?):
3.2.2.1.1	The data parameter of the TRANSFER-DATA generic operation has been refined for Cyclic report procedure usage: the data field contains for each parameter identified in the list-of-parameters a set of 4 values corresponding to: its name, its value, its type and a qualifier reporting the validity of its value.

Best regards.

François Lassère




-----Message d'origine-----
De : Yves.Doat at esa.int [mailto:Yves.Doat at esa.int] 
Envoyé : mardi 23 octobre 2007 09:01
À : Lassere Francois
Cc : css-csts at mailman.ccsds.org; THOMAS Cyril
Objet : CCSDS Configuration Query & Unbuffered Data Delivery - Comments


Dear François,
I uploaded to the CCSDS Web Site the configuration query (CSTS Information-Query Procedure_04_10.2007 YD.doc) and the unbuffered data delivery (CSTS Unbuffered Data-Delivery Procedure_04_10.2007 YD.doc) updated with my comments. Please find below a summary of my comments:
- I reformatted the text to fit with the main document (e.g. I removed the blank lines, I changed the header to fit with the final location);
- I reformatted the state table of the configuration query considering it is now a stateless procedure;
- I added to the unbuffered data delivery the 'unbind' and 'protocol abort' as discussed during our last meeting;

Could you please have a look to the proposed updates and let me know your opinion. In case of problems we could discuss on the telephone (at the latest mid-November during our teleconference).

I did not touch Cyclic Report procedure. My main comments are the following:
   The data parameter of the TRANSFER-DATA is refined. The way the refinement
   is introduced is unclear and we should explain that the TRANSFER-DATA is
   refined and then explain how.
   The sections should be aligned to the numbering of the main document
   (using the same numbering as the two other commented procedures)

Best regards
Yves DOAT
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