[CSS-CLOUD] Review of concept book

[Barkley, Erik J (US 343J)]

Hello Holger,

I have completed the AD review of the concept book.  Overall, I think it is in quite good shape, but I think a little follow-up will be needed.  Here are some general comments:


  1.  No table of figures found -- either we can generate it or ask the CCSDS Secretariat/tech editor to do so
  2.  For publication we will need to have a .svg file for each of the figures
  3.  Revised Scope statement (section 1.2) -- maybe revision is a little more to the point?
  4.  I have done some light editing here and there in the document -- track changes is turned on
        *   I tend to lean heavily toward the "CCSDS Terse" style -- please let me know if you think I have gone too far on this

The book was edited in-place and is in the concept book directory:  ConceptBook<https://spacecomm.sharepoint.com/:f:/r/sites/CSS/Shared%20Documents/CSS-CLOUD/Draft%20Documents/ConceptBook?d=w25038376448f4041ac6d4cd815de05b9&csf=1&web=1&e=u3Rc4i>

Should we aim at having the concept book with the updates ready by the time of the Fall 2026 meetings? If turned around prior to that I should be able to put it in for CESG publication polling very quickly.  What do you think?

Best regards,
-Erik



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