From erik.j.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov Fri Sep 11 17:37:12 2026 From: erik.j.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov (Barkley, Erik J (US 343J)) Date: Fri, 11 Sep 2026 21:37:12 +0000 Subject: [CSS-CLOUD] Review of concept book Message-ID: Hello Holger, I have completed the AD review of the concept book. Overall, I think it is in quite good shape, but I think a little follow-up will be needed. Here are some general comments: 1. No table of figures found -- either we can generate it or ask the CCSDS Secretariat/tech editor to do so 2. For publication we will need to have a .svg file for each of the figures 3. Revised Scope statement (section 1.2) -- maybe revision is a little more to the point? 4. I have done some light editing here and there in the document -- track changes is turned on * I tend to lean heavily toward the "CCSDS Terse" style -- please let me know if you think I have gone too far on this The book was edited in-place and is in the concept book directory: ConceptBook Should we aim at having the concept book with the updates ready by the time of the Fall 2026 meetings? If turned around prior to that I should be able to put it in for CESG publication polling very quickly. What do you think? Best regards, -Erik -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: