[CSS-CLOUD] Concept book review

[Holger Dreihahn]

Hello Erik,
Thank you very much for your review, I’ll have a look. Of course, the review of the book is one of the key topics for CDDS at the fall meeting.

Best regards,
Holger

From: Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) <erik.j.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov>
Date: Friday, 22. August 2025 at 02:45
To: Holger Dreihahn <Holger.Dreihahn at esa.int>
Cc: css-cloud at mailman.ccsds.org <css-cloud at mailman.ccsds.org>
Subject: Concept book review

Hello Holger,

An email to let you know that I have reviewed the latest CDDS concept book on the CWE. Track changes is turned on. In addition to the comments I did some editing here and there to make the concept read more "directly". Mostly this involves replacing statements about what could be done or suggested ways of approaching with more direct present tense language. This is of course a stylistic consideration and does not really alter the concept.  I also thinned out explicatory verbiage on the background for the FRM which I think is not really needed for the concept. Hopefully you find the edits not too "heavy-handed" :-).   A suggestion is that we consider the updated concept book review at the first CDDS session at the upcoming meetings.

Best regards,
-Erik
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