[CMC] Re: CCSDS presentation to IOP

[Nestor.Peccia at esa.int]

Mike
My feedback
ciao
nestor

Chart 8: Nestor if you agree with me that the dotted arrows are too 
complex, then delete them. Otherwise, leave them. 
I deleted the dotted arrows (too complex)
Chart 13 was difficult to fix, and I believe that the right column is the 
problem. I propose deleting the entire right column ?Usage? and leaving 
only ?Benefits?. I have added a new chart 14 that does that. Either delete 
Chart 13, or fix chart 13 and delete Chart 14. 
I prefer to leave what was our past and what is our present. It is the 
most precious CCSDS capital. 
Chart 15: I couldn?t fix it, but I think it is not so useful, and could be 
deleted. For you to decide, Nestor. Fix or delete. 
I will use your new chart
Chart 16: I am just pointing out that this is no longer the entire 
strategic plan (which is still in formulation). It is the *portion* of the 
strategic plan that responds to the IOP. Or just the Strategic Response to 
the IOP (as the title now says). I think this is good enough. You can 
verbalize that a broader strategic plan is in formulation. 
Done
Chart 18: CCSDS response to IOAG: CESG-level fixes needed. 
To be done
Chart 19: Not sure if BSP box can be added, but that is suggested. 
To be analysed
Chart 22: CESG-level fixes needed. 
Done
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