[CESG] CESG-P-2023-06-005 Approval to publish CCSDS 142.10-O-1, Reed-Solomon Product Code for Optical Communication (Orange Book, Issue 1)
CCSDS Secretariat
thomas.gannett at tgannett.net
Wed Aug 30 18:08:58 UTC 2023
Dear CESG Members,
Conditions for approval of CCSDS 142.10-O-1, Reed-Solomon Product Code for Optical Communication (Orange Book, Issue 1) have been disposed to the satisfaction of the AD(s) who voted to approve with conditions. The Secretariat will now proceed with CMC polling to authorize publication.
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From: Tomaso.deCola at dlr.de
Sent: Wednesday, August 30, 2023 5:55 AM
To: bernard.l.edwards at nasa.gov
Cc: jon.hamkins at jpl.nasa.gov; Clemens.Heese at esa.int;
thomas.gannett at tgannett.net; lena.e.braatz at nasa.gov;
araki.tomohiro at jaxa.jp
Subject: AW: CESG-P-2023-06-005 Approval to publish CCSDS 142.10-O-1, Reed-
Solomon Product Code for Optical Communication (Orange Book, Issue 1)
Categories: Poll Condition Closure
Hi Bernie,
just checked the proposed modifications, which are ok for me. As such, my requests can be considered
successfully fulfilled.
Regards,
Tomaso
From: Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) <erik.j.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov>
Sent: Friday, August 25, 2023 11:37 AM
To: ?????; Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600)
Cc: Hamkins, Jon (US 3300); Thomas Gannett; Braatz, Lena E. (HQ-
DA000)[BOOZ ALLEN HAMILTON]; Clemens.Heese at esa.int;
Hiroaki.Yamazoe at sony.com
Subject: Re: [EXTERNAL] RE: CESG-P-2023-06-005 Approval to publish CCSDS
142.10-O-1, Reed-Solomon Product Code for Optical Communication
(Orange Book, Issue 1)
Categories: Poll Condition Closure
The updated book looks very good. The condition is hereby retired.
Best regards,
-Erik
From: ????? <araki.tomohiro at jaxa.jp>
Sent: Friday, August 25, 2023 1:48:03 AM
To: Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600) <bernard.l.edwards at nasa.gov>; Barkley, Erik J (US 3970)
<erik.j.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov>
Cc: Hamkins, Jon (US 3300) <jon.hamkins at jpl.nasa.gov>; Thomas Gannett
<thomas.gannett at tgannett.net>; Braatz, Lena E. (HQ-DA000)[BOOZ ALLEN HAMILTON]
<lena.e.braatz at nasa.gov>; Clemens.Heese at esa.int <Clemens.Heese at esa.int>;
Hiroaki.Yamazoe at sony.com <Hiroaki.Yamazoe at sony.com>
Subject: RE: [EXTERNAL] RE: CESG-P-2023-06-005 Approval to publish CCSDS 142.10-O-1, Reed-Solomon
Product Code for Optical Communication (Orange Book, Issue 1)
Bernie,
I apologies!
I understand well now.
Updated file is attached on this email.
Regards,
Tomohiro Araki, JAXA
From: Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600) <bernard.l.edwards at nasa.gov>
Sent: Friday, August 25, 2023 5:34 PM
To: ????? <araki.tomohiro at jaxa.jp>; Barkley, Erik J (JPL-3970)[JPL Employee]
<erik.j.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov>
Cc: Hamkins, Jon (JPL-3300)[JPL Employee] <jon.hamkins at jpl.nasa.gov>; Thomas Gannett
<thomas.gannett at tgannett.net>; Braatz, Lena E. (HQ-DA000)[BOOZ ALLEN HAMILTON]
<lena.e.braatz at nasa.gov>; Clemens.Heese at esa.int
Subject: Re: [EXTERNAL] RE: CESG-P-2023-06-005 Approval to publish CCSDS 142.10-O-1, Reed-Solomon
Product Code for Optical Communication (Orange Book, Issue 1)
Hi Tomohiro,
It should be 8b/10b. The “1” is missing!
Bernie
From: "?????" <araki.tomohiro at jaxa.jp>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] RE: CESG-P-2023-06-005 Approval to publish CCSDS 142.10-O-1, Reed-Solomon
Product Code for Optical Communication (Orange Book, Issue 1)
Date: 25 August 2023 00:04
To: "Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600)" <bernard.l.edwards at nasa.gov>, "Barkley, Erik J (JPL-3970)[JPL
Employee]" <erik.j.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov>
Cc: "Hamkins, Jon (JPL-3300)[JPL Employee]" <jon.hamkins at jpl.nasa.gov>, "Thomas Gannett"
<thomas.gannett at tgannett.net>, "Braatz, Lena E. (HQ-DA000)[BOOZ ALLEN HAMILTON]"
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Dear Bernie,
Corrected figure is attached on this email.
Is my understanding right?
If right, I will send you updated document file.
Regards,
Tomohiro Araki
From: Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600) <bernard.l.edwards at nasa.gov>
Sent: Friday, August 25, 2023 5:05 AM
To: Barkley, Erik J (JPL-3970)[JPL Employee] <erik.j.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov>
Cc: Hamkins, Jon (JPL-3300)[JPL Employee] <jon.hamkins at jpl.nasa.gov>; Thomas
Gannett <thomas.gannett at tgannett.net>; Braatz, Lena E. (HQ-DA000)[BOOZ ALLEN
HAMILTON] <lena.e.braatz at nasa.gov>; ????? <araki.tomohiro at jaxa.jp>;
Clemens.Heese at esa.int
Subject: RE: CESG-P-2023-06-005 Approval to publish CCSDS 142.10-O-1, Reed-Solomon
Product Code for Optical Communication (Orange Book, Issue 1)
Importance: High
Hi Tomohiro,
We need you to make the change because you have the latest figure. After you do, can
you send it to this thread? It needs to be approved by Erik and Tom Gannett eventually
needs it.
Thanks,
Bernie
From: Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) <erik.j.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov>
Sent: Wednesday, August 23, 2023 5:11 PM
To: Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600) <bernard.l.edwards at nasa.gov>
Cc: Hamkins, Jon (JPL-3300)[JPL Employee] <jon.hamkins at jpl.nasa.gov>; Thomas
Gannett <thomas.gannett at tgannett.net>; Braatz, Lena E. (HQ-DA000)[BOOZ ALLEN
HAMILTON] <lena.e.braatz at nasa.gov>; ????? <araki.tomohiro at jaxa.jp>;
Clemens.Heese at esa.int
Subject: [EXTERNAL] RE: CESG-P-2023-06-005 Approval to publish CCSDS 142.10-O-1,
Reed-Solomon Product Code for Optical Communication (Orange Book, Issue 1)
Hi Bernie,
It’s pretty close, but not quite there. Just missing the “1” from “10”. Please see
screenshot from the latest book below.
Best regards,
-Erik
From: Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600) <bernard.l.edwards at nasa.gov>
Sent: Wednesday, August 23, 2023 11:16
To: Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) <erik.j.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov>
Cc: Hamkins, Jon (US 3300) <jon.hamkins at jpl.nasa.gov>; Thomas Gannett
<thomas.gannett at tgannett.net>; Braatz, Lena E. (HQ-DA000)[BOOZ ALLEN HAMILTON]
<lena.e.braatz at nasa.gov>; ????? <araki.tomohiro at jaxa.jp>;
Clemens.Heese at esa.int
Subject: Re: CESG-P-2023-06-005 Approval to publish CCSDS 142.10-O-1, Reed-Solomon
Product Code for Optical Communication (Orange Book, Issue 1)
Hi Erik,
We believe JAXA has met your condition in the attached version. Please let us know if
you concur.
Thanks,
Bernie Edwards
Here were the conditions levied:
-----Original Message-----
From: ????? <araki.tomohiro at jaxa.jp>
Sent: Sunday, August 6, 2023 10:11 PM
To: Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600)
<bernard.l.edwards at nasa.gov>
Cc: Hamkins, Jon (JPL-3300)[JPL Employee]
<jon.hamkins at jpl.nasa.gov>;
Clemens.Heese at esa.int; Braatz, Lena E.
(HQ-DA000)[BOOZ ALLEN HAMILTON]
<lena.e.braatz at nasa.gov>; Yamazoe,
Hiroaki (JSC-OA111)[Sony Computer Science
Laboratories, Inc]
<hiroaki.yamazoe at sony.com>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] RE: CESG-P-2023-06-
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Reed-Solomon Product Code for Optical
Communication (Orange Book, Issue 1)
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Dear Bernie,
How are you doing in this hot summer?
In Tsukuba and also Tokyo is extreme hot
every day.
My colleague Yamazoesan and I made
updated and final orange book draft
reflecting CESG conditions as attached.
Please check and go forward.
I apologies our slow response.
Regards,
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Tomohiro Araki
Optical Communication Research Team,
R&D directorate, JAXA
araki.tomohiro at jaxa.jp
+81-70-3117-7383
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
-----Original Message-----
From: Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600)
<bernard.l.edwards at nasa.gov>
Sent: Tuesday, July 18, 2023 11:33 PM
To: ????? <araki.tomohiro at jaxa.jp>
Cc: Hamkins, Jon (JPL-3300)[JPL Employee]
<jon.hamkins at jpl.nasa.gov>;
Clemens.Heese at esa.int; Braatz, Lena E.
(HQ-DA000)[BOOZ ALLEN HAMILTON]
<lena.e.braatz at nasa.gov>
Subject: Re: CESG-P-2023-06-005 Approval
to publish CCSDS 142.10-O-1, Reed-Solomon
Product Code for Optical Communication
(Orange Book, Issue 1)
Dear Tomohiro,
I hope you are doing well and that it is
not too hot and humid in Japan this
summer.
The JAXA Orange Book poll is complete and
that there are conditions that must be
met before publication. See below.
As the email below indicates, disposition
of the conditions must be negotiated
directly with the AD(s) who submitted the
conditions, and the Secretariat must be
cc:d on all related correspondence. Tom
Gannett will be responsible for making
any required changes to the text, as he
now maintains the most recent version of
the book. Of course, we can help you
with this process.
Let me know if you have any questions.
Thanks,
Bernie
-----Original Message-----
From: CCSDS Secretariat
<thomas.gannett at tgannett.net>
Sent: Tuesday, July 11, 2023 3:38 PM
To: bernard.l.edwards at nasa.gov; Braatz,
Lena [USA] <braatz_lena at bah.com>
Cc: Erik.Barkley at jpl.nasa.gov;
Tomaso.deCola at dlr.de
Subject: [External] Re: CESG-P-2023-06-
005 Approval to publish CCSDS 142.10-O-1,
Reed-Solomon Product Code for Optical
Communication (Orange Book, Issue 1)
Dear Document Rapporteur,
The CESG poll to approve publication of
CCSDS 142.10-O-1, Reed-Solomon Product
Code for Optical Communication (Orange
Book, Issue 1) concluded with conditions.
Please negotiate disposition of the
conditions directly with the AD(s) who
voted to approve with conditions and CC
the Secretariat on all related
correspondence.
CESG E-Poll Identifier: CESG-P-2023-06-
005 Approval to publish CCSDS 142.10-O-1,
Reed-Solomon Product Code for Optical
Communication (Orange Book, Issue 1)
Results of CESG poll beginning 26 June
2023 and ending 10 July 2023:
Abstain: 0 (0%)
Approve Unconditionally: 2 (50%)
(Aguilar Sanchez, Wilmot) Approve with
Conditions: 2 (50%) (Barkley,
Cola) Disapprove with Comment: 0 (0%)
CONDITIONS/COMMENTS:
Erik Barkley (Approve with
Conditions): Pg 3-1 Figure 3-1 -- for
clarity, in figure 3-1, suggest changing
the box labeled "8b10b" to be "8b/10b
Encoding"
Tomaso de Cola (Approve with
Conditions): 1) References [8] and [9]
in section 1.8 do not appear to be
normative (i.e. not recalled in the
experimental specification part).
2) Section 2.1: the scope of the
recommendation is state to be for
spacecraft altitude at 1000-5000 km. Why
nothing below 1000 km? Then aftewards
still in Section 2.1 it is stated that
the specification can apply also to
longer distances. Up to deep space then?
3) Clause 3.2.3: Note 1 reports about
supporting non-CCSDS frames (I guess
those subject then to GFP), then note 2
clarifies this may also happen through
USLP multiplexing (I guess as user
defined octet stream isn't it?). Wouldn't
it better to have a note about CCSDS
frames overall and then another one
saying how one could support non-CCSDS
protocols?
4) Annex B: it is claimed that an bit
error rate simulations were conducted
over AWGN channel with a fading channel:
what does it mean exactly?
5) Annex B: where can one find evidence
that the proposed scheme really works as
stated? The Annex B title is about
simulation results, but I cannot see any
reported results in fact. If these are
available in existing documents, please
add reference to them.
Total Respondents: 4
No response was received from the
following Area(s):
SEA
MOIMS
SECRETARIAT INTERPRETATION OF
RESULTS: Approved with Conditions
PROPOSED SECRETARIAT
ACTION: Generate CMC poll
after conditions have been addressed
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