[CESG] CESG-P-2020-03-001 Approval to publish CCSDS 371.0-G-1, Application and Support Layer Architecture (Green Book, Issue 1)

Wed Oct 21 21:13:44 UTC 2020

Dear CESG Members,

Conditions for approval of CCSDS 371.0-G-1, Application and Support 
Layer Architecture (Green Book, Issue 1) have been disposed to the 
satisfaction of the AD(s) who voted to approve with conditions. The 
Secretariat will now proceed with CMC polling to authorize publication.
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From:	Shames, Peter M (US 312B) <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov>
Sent:	Thursday, August 27, 2020 5:37 PM
To:	Tom Gannett
Subject:	FW: [Sea-sa] Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review

Follow Up Flag:	Follow up
Flag Status:	Flagged

Categories:	Poll Condition Closure

Hey Tom,

Here is an email trail with all of the ASL reviewer "I agree" text in it.  Do not know if I sent it before.

Peter

From: Dan Smith <danford.s.smith at nasa.gov> 
Date: Thursday, June 25, 2020 at 5:13 AM 
To: Peter Shames <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov> 
Subject: RE: Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review

Peter,

The key points I had are fine now.

I would push to get it published.

It will be interesting how much of it will be overcome by other changes if MO does ½ of what 
they are considering.

Dan

=========================
Dan Smith
NASA/GSFC
Code 580
Bldg 23, Room E443
8800 Greenbelt Road
Greenbelt, MD  20771
Office:  301-286-2230
Cell:  301-648-9611
Dan.Smith at nasa.gov

Believe the science.  There are no alternative facts.

From: David Berry <david.s.berry at jpl.nasa.gov> 
Date: Saturday, July 4, 2020 at 5:06 AM 
To: Peter Shames <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov> 
Cc: Mario Merri <Mario.Merri at esa.int> 
Subject: Re: Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review

Peter:  I've reviewed the RID/PID Tracking Sheet and am satisfied 
that the SAWG has addressed my suggestions satisfactorily.

David

From: Erik Barkley <erik.j.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov> 
Date: Tuesday, July 7, 2020 at 2:05 PM 
To: Peter Shames <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov> 
Cc: "marek.prochazka at esa.int" <marek.prochazka at esa.int>, Mario Merri 
<Mario.Merri at esa.int>, "Wilmot, Jonathan J. (GSFC-5820)" 
<jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov>, Dan Smith <danford.s.smith at nasa.gov>, "'Hickey, 
Joseph P. (GSFC-582.0)[VANTAGE SYSTEMS INC]'" <joseph.p.hickey at nasa.gov>, David 
Berry <david.s.berry at jpl.nasa.gov> 
Subject: RE: [Sea-sa] Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review

Peter et al,

I have taken a look at the updated document and I am satisfied that 
the conditions I levied as part of the CESG publication poll have been 
satisfied.  Thank you to you and your team for improving the 
document considerably.

Best regards,
-Erik 

From: Gian Paolo Calzolari <Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int> 
Date: Wednesday, July 1, 2020 at 12:06 PM 
To: Peter Shames <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov> 
Cc: Tom Gannett <thomas.gannett at tgannett.net> 
Subject: Re: [EXTERNAL] Re: Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review

Peter, I withdraw my PID.  
Do whatever you like  

Gian Paolo 

From: Mario Merri <Mario.Merri at esa.int> 
Date: Friday, July 10, 2020 at 3:49 AM 
To: Peter Shames <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov> 
Cc: "Wilmot, Jonathan J. (GSFC-5820)" <jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov>, "'Hickey, Joseph 
P. (GSFC-582.0)[VANTAGE SYSTEMS INC]'" <joseph.p.hickey at nasa.gov>, Brigitte Behal 
<brigitte.behal at cnes.fr> 
Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [Sea-sa] Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review

It is OK with me.  

Regards,  

__Mario  

From: "Wilmot, Jonathan J. (GSFC-5820)" <jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov> 
Date: Friday, July 10, 2020 at 12:32 PM 
To: Peter Shames <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov>, "Hickey, Joseph P. (GSFC-
582.0)[VANTAGE SYSTEMS INC]" <joseph.p.hickey at nasa.gov>, Mario Merri 
<Mario.Merri at esa.int> 
Subject: RE: [Sea-sa] Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review

Peter,

     I am also good with this. Ramon and the SOIS folks are making sure our Green book aligns.

   Kind regards,

         Jonathan

Jonathan Wilmot
NASA/GSFC 
Code 580 Senior Engineer for Flight Systems
cFS Software Architect
CCSDS SOIS Area Director
Office 301-286-2623
Cell 301-751-2658

From: "Hickey, Joseph P. (GSFC-582.0)[VANTAGE SYSTEMS INC]" 
<joseph.p.hickey at nasa.gov> 
Date: Tuesday, July 7, 2020 at 3:35 PM 
To: Peter Shames <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov>, Mario Merri 
<Mario.Merri at esa.int>, "Wilmot, Jonathan J. (GSFC-5820)" 
<jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov> 
Subject: Re: [Sea-sa] Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review

Hello Peter,

Yes - the current document looks good - I am satisfied that my comments were 
addressed.

Thanks!

Joe Hickey 
Software Engineer - Vantage Systems, Inc. 
Phone: 203.518.0270

From: Shames, Peter M (US 312B) <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov> 
Sent: Tuesday, July 7, 2020 5:55 PM 
To: Mario Merri <Mario.Merri at esa.int>; Wilmot, Jonathan J. (GSFC-5800) 
<jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov>; Hickey, Joseph P. (GSFC-582.0)[VANTAGE SYSTEMS INC] 
<joseph.p.hickey at nasa.gov> 
Subject: Re: [Sea-sa] Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review 

Mario, Jonathan, and Joe,

We have heard in the affirmative from other reviewers of the current version of the ASL 
document.

Can we please get your assessment and statement of whether, or not, the current 
document is acceptable?

Thanks, Peter

From: Erik Barkley <erik.j.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov> 
Date: Tuesday, July 7, 2020 at 2:05 PM 
To: Peter Shames <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov> 
Cc: "marek.prochazka at esa.int" <marek.prochazka at esa.int>, Mario 
Merri <Mario.Merri at esa.int>, "Wilmot, Jonathan J. (GSFC-5820)" 
<jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov>, Dan Smith <danford.s.smith at nasa.gov>, 
"'Hickey, Joseph P. (GSFC-582.0)[VANTAGE SYSTEMS INC]'" 
<joseph.p.hickey at nasa.gov>, David Berry <david.s.berry at jpl.nasa.gov> 
Subject: RE: [Sea-sa] Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review

Peter et al,

I have taken a look at the updated document and I am 
satisfied that the conditions I levied as part of the CESG 
publication poll have been satisfied.  Thank you to you 
and your team for improving the document considerably.

Best regards,
-Erik 

From: SEA-SA <sea-sa-bounces at mailman.ccsds.org> on behalf of 
SEA-SA <sea-sa at mailman.ccsds.org> 
Reply-To: Peter Shames <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov> 
Date: Tuesday, June 23, 2020 at 2:25 PM 
To: SEA-SA <sea-sa at mailman.ccsds.org> 
Cc: "'Prochazka, Marek (JSC-OA111)[EUROPEAN SPACE AGENCY]'" 
<marek.prochazka at esa.int>, Mario Merri 
<Mario.Merri at esa.int>, "Wilmot, Jonathan J. (GSFC-5820)" 
<jonathan.j.wilmot at nasa.gov>, Dan Smith 
<danford.s.smith at nasa.gov>, "'Hickey, Joseph P. (GSFC-
582.0)[VANTAGE SYSTEMS INC]'" <joseph.p.hickey at nasa.gov>, 
David Berry <david.s.berry at jpl.nasa.gov>, Erik Barkley 
erik.barkley at jpl.nasa.gov  
Subject: [EXTERNAL] [Sea-sa] Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for 
review

Dear SEA SAWG and other ASL reviewers,

The three editors of the ASL ADD GB (Krosley, Thompson, Shames) have 
completed our work of updating the document to resolve issues raised 
in the CESG review and also issues raised by other reviewers.  All of 
these files are now out in the SEA SA CWE area.  The final document, in 
Word and PDF form, is to be found here:

https://cwe.ccsds.org/sea/docs/Forms/AllItems.aspx?RootFolder=%2Fs
ea%2Fdocs%2FSEA%2DSA%2FDraft%20Documents%2FApp%20%2D%20
Support%20Layer%20Green%20Book%2FASL%20ADD%20Final%20Doc
%20%2D%20files&View=%7BA709F322%2D0E67%2D45C7%2D932D%2
DCB78C55CE268%7D&

The separate files of revised figures for the SO materials are in that 
folder as well.  The files of revised figures for the MO materials are in a 
separate location:

https://cwe.ccsds.org/sea/docs/Forms/AllItems.aspx?RootFolder=%2Fs
ea%2Fdocs%2FSEA%2DSA%2FDraft%20Documents%2FApp%20%2D%20
Support%20Layer%20Green%20Book%2FMOIMS%20Model%20and%20
Graphics%2023%2D06%2D2020&View=%7BA709F322%2D0E67%2D45C
7%2D932D%2DCB78C55CE268%7D&

A version of the Word doc that has track changes on (371x0g0_PID 
dispositions 22June20 track final) is to be found in the following folder 
along with other work products including the tracking spreadsheet 
where we recorded the SAWG resolutions and the final status:

https://cwe.ccsds.org/sea/docs/Forms/AllItems.aspx?RootFolder=%2Fs
ea%2Fdocs%2FSEA%2DSA%2FDraft%20Documents%2FApp%20%2D%20
Support%20Layer%20Green%20Book%2FASL%20ADD%20Review%20in
puts%20%2D%20resolutions&FolderCTID=0x012000F83FD93BEFF45E4F
B5D1769B01CA762F&View=%7BA709F322%2D0E67%2D45C7%2D932D
%2DCB78C55CE268%7D

The final copy of that tracking spreadsheet is attached here so that you 
can easily determine the status of your PIDs and/or RIDs.  All of the raw 
and transcribed RID & PID files, in various states of completion , are also 
in that folder.

All of the changes to this document, as you will see from the raw, track 
changes, version of the Word doc are extensive in scope.  There is 
hardly a page that did not get touched.  That said, these changes, for all 
their breadth, are not "deep".  They are largely editorial and for clarity 
rather than to effect any substantive change in meaning or 
scope.  However, because of their extent we do not think it appropriate 
to just ask to send this directly to publication.  Accordingly, we are 
asking that the SEA SAWG, and the reviewers who submitted PIDs or 
RIDs, review this final document and either concur with the changes, as 
made, or request further clarifications/adjustments.

We ask that you provide a response no later than two weeks from 
today, close of business, West Coast time, 7 July 2020.  If you do have 
issues or concerns please record them in the "Reclama" column, col J, of 
the attached tracking spreadsheet.  

Thanks for your time and support, Peter