[CESG] Draft of revised Org & Proc Concept paper section / lifetime of only nine months? etc

[Gian.Paolo.Calzolari at esa.int]

Peter (but not only :o),
        Do we really need <lifetime of only nine months>?

Moreover, was this <The Secretariat will then assign the concept paper a 
reference number and a date of expiration> ever done?

<will announce its availability to one or more mailing lists of interested 
parties>
who are the interested parties?
I think they could be CESG and affected WGs.
For WGs we may have the originator WG (that would know about it) or the WG 
that shall do the work (if the paper comes from external source) or the 
WGs impacted by the work even if this is done in another WG.
All in all, would it be simpler to limit distribution to CESG mailing list 
or better to CESG-all?

<All that is necessary is to observe some basic formatting rules that are 
established by the Secretariat in the CCSDS Publications Manual>
Really?
The word "concept" is not found in that manual.....

More comments may follow if I find more than two minutes to dedicate to 
your input  :o)

Regards

Gippo





From:
"Shames, Peter M (312G)" <peter.m.shames at jpl.nasa.gov>
To:
CCSDS Engineering Steering Group - CESG Exec <cesg at mailman.ccsds.org>
Cc:
Tom Gannett <thomas.gannett at tgannett.net>
Date:
03/11/2013 01:09
Subject:
[CESG] Draft of revised Org & Proc Concept paper section
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Dear CESG Colleagues,
Attached is a draft of the proposed revisions to CCSDS Org & Proc concept 
paper section, Annex B1.  This update is to be inserted along with a 
reference to Annex B1 in Sections 2.3.4 and 6.1.1.  This file contains the 
original text of Section B1, with the proposed changes shown using Track 
Changes so that you can see what has been modified.  The primary changes 
consist of the following:
1.      Clarification of there being two general types of concept papers, 
one for WG formation and the second for specific documents or topics
2.      Addition of a bulletized list of topics common to both types
3.      Addition of an added bulletized list of topics specifically for 
BoF Concept Papers
I will note that Gippo and Gilles should recognize some of their own words 
in these two sets of topics, since they are derived, in part, from their 
inputs to the Org & Procs doc and from their requests for specific topics 
to be addressed in the Next Generation Space Link Protocol concept paper.  
I believe, as revised, that these are suitable for use in all potential 
future standards and WG concept papers.

Your feedback is solicited.

Best regards, Peter

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