[CESG] Formatting/Contents of the CCSDS Operating Plan produced via CWE

[Nestor.Peccia at esa.int]

Peter

Some feedback on what I did in draft version 8 (coming soon)
ciao
nestor
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>> marked up copy of the CCSDS Strat Plan, version 6
All comments have been accepted


1.      I propose modifying this text in the intro, key text highlighted 
"The CCSDS Operating Plan, that provides the current CCSDS tactical 
program of work and organizational details, supplements this CCSDS 
Strategic Plan.  The Operating Plan, which is established and maintained 
by the CCSDS Engineering Steering Group, consists of the on-line 
descriptions of the CCSDS Technical Organization in the CCSDS 
Collaborative Work Environment (CWE) and the project definitions in the 
CCSDS Management Framework, and is nominally updated twice per year or 
more often, as required.
[NP] : Inserted, but draft 7 contained already further explanations
2.      SEA ? could add a paragraph stating what the interfaces and 
interactions are with other areas, ala the 3'rd paragraph in SIS Sec 6. In 
fact, we should probably do this for each of Sec 1-5 since it is missing 
and does deal with one of Miro's key issues, that of documenting 
dependencies and interactions among CCSDS areas of work.
[NP] Comments inserted
3.      MOIMS ? item a) is done, should be removed
[NP] Done
4.      CSS ? items e, f & g could probably be combined into 1 relating to 
use of CSTS framework to define a set of new services.
[NP] Comment inserted
5.      SOIS ? has a "promote XTEDS" goal which is really sort of a "all 
of CCSDS is supposed to do this sort of thing" goal, with no identified 
deliverable.  SOIS could include future goals for SDR and SAVIOR/SUMO 
style on-board reference architectures.  Why doesn't it?
[NP] Inserted
6.      SLS ? as written is too low a level for a set of strategic goals, 
they are tactical and read more like a precise of the technical projects. 
Seems out of joint with the rest of the document.
[NP] Comment inserted
7.      SIS ? items a & b are like SOIS, in the "promote" category without 
identified deliverables.  It also could be rather more specific about 
things that they plan to develop such as  protocols, security, network 
management, routing, coordination.
[NP] Comment inserted
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