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Hi Peter - </div>
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Your suggestion is fine with me; Enrico indicated previously that the "must" in your below sentence was also an acceptable resolution.</div>
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@Enrico: Can you please reply to explicitly confirm?</div>
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@Tom: Will you make the change and move towards polling and publication, please?</div>
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Thanks.</div>
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<b>Sent:</b> Monday, January 17, 2022 10:38 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int <Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int>; Kevin K Gifford <kevin.gifford@colorado.edu>; Issler Jean-Luc <Jean-Luc.Issler@cnes.fr><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Moury Gilles <Gilles.Moury@cnes.fr>; Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int <Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int>; CCSDS Secretariat <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net>; sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org <sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Sls-rfm] Fw: [EXTERNAL] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review</font>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span lang="FR">Dear Enrico, Jean-Luc, Kevin, et al,</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">I am glad that this saga appears to be coming to a close. I support the revised version and the intent of protecting the shield zone of the Moon.</p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">That said, I do want to point out that this CCSDS document really has no jurisdiction to enforce international regulations such as those promulgated by the ITU nor the SFCG. So putting in that word “shall” in this CCSDS document is
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">I would, therefore, recommend the second option which is to leave the sentence just stating:</p>
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</span></span></span><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">Therefore, adopters must ensure compatibility with ITU Radio Regulations and SFCG recommendations (references [33] and [42]).</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">If that is acceptable you have my full support.</p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal">Best regards, Peter</p>
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</b><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:black">"Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int" <Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, January 17, 2022 at 1:28 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>Kevin K Gifford <kevin.gifford@colorado.edu><br>
<b>Cc: </b>Gilles Moury <Gilles.Moury@cnes.fr>, "Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int" <Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int>, Peter Shames <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov>, Tom Gannett <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net>, "sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org" <sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Sls-rfm] Fw: [EXTERNAL] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Dear Kevin,</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">after an in-depth discussion with Jean-Luc, both of us agree with the latest 883 version provided that a small change is entered, changing in section 3.2.1 bullet a "should" into "shall" for the
SFCG recommendations. This is because even if they are recommendations, an agency has to provide a valid waiver request in case of violations and the rest of SFCG must approve the request, and this may not be always successful.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">The current text reads:</span>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">a) Therefore, adopters must ensure compatibility with ITU Radio Regulations and should also comply with SFCG recommendations (references [33] and [42]).</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">This simple change takes care of all other concerns by Jean-Luc. Another possibility (the Australian way) is to delete "should" so that the previous "must" applies.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Ignacio shares our views too.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Thanks again for your open dialogue,</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Regards, Enrico</span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#5F5F5F">From: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"Kevin K Gifford" <kevin.gifford@colorado.edu></span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#5F5F5F">To: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int" <Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int>, "Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int" <Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int></span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#5F5F5F">Cc: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"CCSDS Secretariat" <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net>, "Shames, Peter M (US 312B)" <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov>,
"Moury Gilles" <Gilles.Moury@cnes.fr>, "Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600"</span> <br>
<span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#5F5F5F">Date: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">12/01/22 02:54</span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#5F5F5F">Subject: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Re: [Sls-rfm] Fw: [EXTERNAL] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review</span>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">Dear Enrico, Dear Ignacio - </span><br>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">Thanks again for your inputs for CESG Final Review of CCSDS-883-0-R-0 submitted on 15-Dec-2021.</span>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">As the 10-Jan-2022 request for response has elapsed, I assume the dispositions are agreeable to all.</span>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">I therefore propose that the CCSDS Secretariat move forward with CMC polling and publication.</span>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">Please inform me, the CCSDS Secretariat, and the group on copy if any objections by Monday, 17-Jan-2022.</span>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">Thanks again for the valued inputs.</span> <br>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">Kevin</span> </p>
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<b>From:</b> Kevin K Gifford <kevin.gifford@colorado.edu><b><br>
Sent:</b> Tuesday, December 21, 2021 3:25 PM<b><br>
To:</b> Issler Jean-Luc <Jean-Luc.Issler@cnes.fr>; Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int <Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int>; sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org <sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org><b><br>
Cc:</b> Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int <Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int>; Lee, Dennis K (JPL-332G)[JPL Employee] <dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov>; wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov <wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov>; shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov <shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov>; victor.j.sank@nasa.gov
<victor.j.sank@nasa.gov>; Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600 <bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov>; jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov <jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov>; Ray Wagner <raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov>; CCSDS Secretariat <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net>; Shames, Peter M (US 312B)
<peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov>; Moury Gilles <Gilles.Moury@cnes.fr>; Kevin K Gifford <kevin.gifford@colorado.edu><b><br>
Subject:</b> Re: [Sls-rfm] Fw: [EXTERNAL] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review<span style="font-size:12.0pt">
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">[Enrico: Please post on sls-rfm mailing list, thanks]</span>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">Dear Enrico, Dear Jean-Luc - </span><br>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">Thank you for your time and effort to provide SFCG and SLS-RFM review inputs to the SOIS-WIR CCSDS-883 document.</span>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">The updated document is attached, and the changes incorporated into the document are easily reviewable/verifiable via MSWord Track Changes.</span>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">-- All inputs, except the requested change below, from Enrico and Jean-Luc have been incorporated into the document verbatim, with some modifications solely for English grammar concerns.</span>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">The SOIS-WIR WG rejects the RID to add the below highlighted sentence in Paragraph-1 of Section 3.2.1 GENERAL: REQUIREMENTS</span>
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">3.2.1 GENERAL REQUIREMENTS
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">This Recommended Standard does not provide any normative guidance in the frequency values of the permitted bands (in addition to the applicable SFCG PNT band to protect:
2483.5–2500 MHz) by the space systems using the wireless terrestrial standards covered in this book. Consequently, the following constraints on the frequency selection must be followed:
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">The rationale of the SOIS-WIR WG is that there is <u>
no need, and it is confusing to make this explicit single phrase statement when the rest of the document references SFCG 32-2R3 which has this explicit restriction. Tables 3-1, 3-2 and 3-3 in the CCSDS-883 document have this constraint as well.</u></span>
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<b><span style="font-size:12.0pt">@Enrico, @Jean-Luc: Please review the attached document (easy to do with Track Changes) and let me know if there are any remaining concerns. Please have your comments to me by 10 January 2022 (sooner would be great ;-).</span></b>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">If any questions, or if any discussion is needed, please let me know at your earliest convenience.</span>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">Sincere thanks again for your time to review!</span>
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<span style="font-size:12.0pt">Kevin</span> <br>
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<b>From:</b> Issler Jean-Luc <Jean-Luc.Issler@cnes.fr><b><br>
Sent:</b> Wednesday, December 15, 2021 9:07 AM<b><br>
To:</b> Kevin K Gifford <kevin.gifford@colorado.edu>; Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int <Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int>; sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org <sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org><b><br>
Cc:</b> Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int <Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int>; Lee, Dennis K (JPL-332G)[JPL Employee] <dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov>; wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov <wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov>; shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov <shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov>; victor.j.sank@nasa.gov
<victor.j.sank@nasa.gov>; Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600 <bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov>; jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov <jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov>; Ray Wagner <raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov>; CCSDS Secretariat <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net>; Shames, Peter M (US 312B)
<peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov>; Moury Gilles <Gilles.Moury@cnes.fr><b><br>
Subject:</b> RE: [Sls-rfm] Fw: [EXTERNAL] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review<span style="font-size:12.0pt">
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">Dear Kevin, dear all,</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">To answer to your question bellow, my comments previously sent are
</span>(1) the official consensus CNES position, <span style="color:#004080">and</span> (3)
<span style="color:#424282">my comments</span> as a member of SLS-RFM<span style="color:#004080">.</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">Please, find also attached here a combined version, including the comments made so far by RFM members and the RFM chairman having in mind SFCG concerns as SFCG chairman. The updates proposed in this combined
version are supported by each of the RFM members having issued comments. Please consider from now this combined version instead of the previous separate versions.
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">Very best regards</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">Jean-Luc</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><b>De :</b> Kevin K Gifford <kevin.gifford@colorado.edu> <b>
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Envoyé :</b> mardi 14 décembre 2021 17:39<b><br>
À :</b> Issler Jean-Luc <Jean-Luc.Issler@cnes.fr>; Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int; sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org<b><br>
Cc :</b> Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int; Lee, Dennis K (JPL-332G)[JPL Employee] <dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov>; wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov; shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov; victor.j.sank@nasa.gov; Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600 <bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov>; jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov;
Ray Wagner <raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov>; CCSDS Secretariat <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net>; Shames, Peter M (US 312B) <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov>; Kevin K Gifford <kevin.gifford@colorado.edu><b><br>
Objet :</b> Re: [Sls-rfm] Fw: [EXTERNAL] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review</p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Dear Jean-Luc - </span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Thank you for your time to comment and provide inputs.</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Please allow me to pose a clarification question: My understanding is that you are providing comments/inputs as a member of SLS-RFM, correct? The reason I am inquiring is that in your comments below you
are summarizing as "CNES comments" and I want to understand if your statement is:</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">(1) the official consensus CNES position, or,
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">(2) the official SLS-RFM position, or
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">(3) your assessment as a member of SLS-RFM?
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">I assume your statements are as a member of the SLS-RFM WG, please correct me if I am mistaken...</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Thanks.</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Kevin</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><b>From:</b> Issler Jean-Luc <<a href="mailto:Jean-Luc.Issler@cnes.fr">Jean-Luc.Issler@cnes.fr</a>><b><br>
Sent:</b> Tuesday, December 14, 2021 8:56 AM<b><br>
To:</b> <a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</a> <<a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</a>>;
<a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</a> <<a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</a>>; Kevin K Gifford <<a href="mailto:kevin.gifford@colorado.edu">kevin.gifford@colorado.edu</a>><b><br>
Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int">Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int</a> <<a href="mailto:Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int">Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int</a>>; Lee, Dennis K (JPL-332G)[JPL Employee] <<a href="mailto:dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov">dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>;
<a href="mailto:wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov">wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov</a> <<a href="mailto:wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov">wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov</a>>;
<a href="mailto:shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov">shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov</a> <<a href="mailto:shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov">shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov</a>>;
<a href="mailto:victor.j.sank@nasa.gov">victor.j.sank@nasa.gov</a> <<a href="mailto:victor.j.sank@nasa.gov">victor.j.sank@nasa.gov</a>>; Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600 <<a href="mailto:bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov">bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov</a>>;
<a href="mailto:jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov">jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov</a> <<a href="mailto:jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov">jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov</a>>; Ray Wagner <<a href="mailto:raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov">raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov</a>>; CCSDS Secretariat
<<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>; Shames, Peter M (US 312B) <<a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov">peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><b><br>
Subject:</b> RE: [Sls-rfm] Fw: [EXTERNAL] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review<span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">Dear all, </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">Please find here my comments as a member of RFM WG:</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><b><span style="color:#004080">First Major comments:</span></b></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">-</span><span style="font-size:7.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif; color:#004080"> </span><span style="color:#004080">The informative and normative materials of 883 shall be less vague vis a
vis protection of Radio Astronomy in the Shielded Zone of the Moon, in order the implementer to have the proper level of essential information and requirements without needing to read a pile of documents, without not be required to protect one band having
an influence on RA protection, and without having to wait at least years an eventual possible futur CCSDS complementary and relevant RFM document.
<b>CCSDS rules actually allows this proper level to be part of 883 thanks to a few lines only*</b>.</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">-</span><span style="font-size:7.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif; color:#004080"> </span><span style="color:#004080">The informative and normative materials of 883 shall be less ambiguous on
standardising, when using an current SFCG band for a wireless link, the need to not have wireless channels spectrally outside (even partly) the said SFCG wireless band.
<b>CCSDS rules actually allows to avoid such an ambiguity in a CCSDS standard</b>. If not, 883 would put in danger adjacent SFCG lunar bands to be used for links different than wireless, and this would be not good*.</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">* <i>Similar comments (detailed in track changes in the attached version) were already taken into account by the Wireless WG which submited by consensus a “CESG-approuval” version of 883 to CESG. Then, 4 PIDS
broke this consensus, and CNES + DLR members of the Wireless WG informed the Wireless WG members about the consensus having been broken (and it is still the case up till now). The declared disposition of a significant number of CNES RIDS in the frame of 883
agency review is actually no more valid up till now. The new comments made in the attached version however propose a new compromise, without removing the fundamental goals related to RA in the SZM and the protection of SFCG non-wireless bands. It was said
about this 883 version submitted to RFM that it has to not adress some frequency issues (</i></span><i><span style="font-size:8.0pt; color:#004080">rather “forward work to the implementing engineer”</span><span style="color:#004080">), but “MHz” appear 66
times (before CNES present comments) and “GHz” 82 times (before CNES present comments) !! CNES think that these 148 references to frequencies in the submited version are relevant in 883, as well as the very few aditional ones proposed by CNES to be re-introduced
to recover the agreed consensus. Transfering most of these references into a future RFM document to be refered now in 883 as a future document, and to be published (eventually with the required solved ambiguities) in at least some years, would put more in
danger Radio Astronomy in the SZM as well as some SFCG non-wireless bands. This would be not appropriate for CNES. CNES proposes the ambiguities to be removed now, as agreed by the Wireless WG which submited to CESG a 883 standard version without such ambiguities.
</span></i></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><b><span style="color:#004080">Other comments:</span></b></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">-</span><span style="font-size:7.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif; color:#004080"> </span><span style="color:#004080">The title of the 883 standard could be improved by coping more with the
content of the standard: Wifi and 3GPP (while there are also optical and UWB wireless links which could be standardized later on by CCSDS). Without puting “Wifi and 3GPP” (or Wifi and 3GPP LTE) in the title, it would be as if (for instance) the DVB-S2 CCSDS
space telemetry standard would be named only “VCM” in its title !</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">-</span><span style="font-size:7.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif; color:#004080"> </span><span style="color:#004080">The relative velocity (Doppler) between the transmitter and the receiver
is mentioned to be taken into account; but, the relative acceleration (Doppler slope) is not mentioned to be also taken into account, as it shall be.</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">Have a nice day; Very best regards</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080">Jean-Luc</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="color:#004080"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><b>De :</b> SLS-RFM <<a href="mailto:sls-rfm-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-rfm-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org</a>>
<b>De la part de</b> <a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</a><b><br>
Envoyé :</b> lundi 6 décembre 2021 08:51<b><br>
À :</b> <a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</a><b><br>
Objet :</b> [Sls-rfm] Fw: [EXTERNAL] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review</p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">For you consideration when submitting comments by Dec. 15.</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">
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</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
Regards, Enrico</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">
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From: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"Wagner, Raymond S. (JSC-EV811)" <</span><a href="mailto:raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">></span><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">
</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#5F5F5F"><br>
To: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"Fong, Wai H. (GSFC-5670)" <</span><a href="mailto:wai.h.fong@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">wai.h.fong@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>,
"Kevin K Gifford" <</span><a href="mailto:kevin.gifford@colorado.edu"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">kevin.gifford@colorado.edu</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>, "Shames, Peter M (JPL-312B)[JPL
Employee]" <</span><a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">></span><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">
</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#5F5F5F"><br>
Cc: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"</span><a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"
<</span><a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>, "Rodriguez, Shannon (GSFC-5670)" <</span><a href="mailto:shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>,
"Lee, Wing-tsz (GSFC-5670)" <</span><a href="mailto:wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>, "Lee, Dennis K (JPL-332G)[JPL
Employee]" <</span><a href="mailto:dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>, "Sank, Victor J. (GSFC-567.0)[SCIENCE
SYSTEMS AND APPLICATIONS INC]" <</span><a href="mailto:victor.j.sank@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">victor.j.sank@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>, "Edwards, Bernard
L. (GSFC-5600)" <</span><a href="mailto:bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>, "Wilmot, Jonathan J. (GSFC-5800)"
<</span><a href="mailto:jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>, "Wagner, Raymond S. (JSC-EV811)" <</span><a href="mailto:raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">></span><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">
</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#5F5F5F"><br>
Date: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">03/12/21 23:07</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">
</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#5F5F5F"><br>
Subject: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">RE: [EXTERNAL] [Sls-rfm] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif">
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<p style="margin:0in">Hi, all. After coordinating with GSFC management today, SOIS-WIR agrees to add the following statement to
<b>Sec. 1.3 Applicability</b> of the copy of the document under review by SLS:</p>
<p style="margin:0in"> </p>
<p style="margin:0in"><b>NOTE: this book covers interoperability recommendations for Wi-Fi and 3GPP architectures. It does not address recommendations specific to deployments in unique mission environments. It is forward work for the implementing engineer
to address, on a case-by-case basis, issues such as band selection, antenna selection, antenna placement, antenna elevation, cell site planning, network loading, mission criticality, backhaul, etc. to provide desired coverage and service for a specific mission.
</b></p>
<p style="margin:0in"> </p>
<p style="margin:0in">This should disposition outstanding concerns and allow SLS to proceed with a review scoped to the “redlines” Kevin mentions below<span style="font-size:12.0pt">. </span> Kevin can follow up with a new document incorporating the above
text, but the previous copy still serves to review the “redline” changes using change tracking as Kevin suggests below.</p>
<p style="margin:0in"> </p>
<p style="margin:0in">Thanks to all involved for identifying and resolving this issue today.</p>
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<li class="x_MsoNormal" style="">Ray</li></ul>
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</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"> </p>
<p style="margin:0in"><b>From:</b> Fong, Wai H. (GSFC-5670) <<a href="mailto:wai.h.fong@nasa.gov">wai.h.fong@nasa.gov</a>>
<b><br>
Sent:</b> Friday, December 3, 2021 9:59 AM<b><br>
To:</b> Kevin K Gifford <<a href="mailto:kevin.gifford@colorado.edu">kevin.gifford@colorado.edu</a>>; Shames, Peter M (JPL-312B)[JPL Employee] <<a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov">peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><b><br>
Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</a>; Rodriguez, Shannon (GSFC-5670) <<a href="mailto:shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov">shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov</a>>; Lee, Wing-tsz (GSFC-5670) <<a href="mailto:wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov">wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov</a>>;
Lee, Dennis K (JPL-332G)[JPL Employee] <<a href="mailto:dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov">dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>; Sank, Victor J. (GSFC-567.0)[SCIENCE SYSTEMS AND APPLICATIONS INC] <<a href="mailto:victor.j.sank@nasa.gov">victor.j.sank@nasa.gov</a>>; Wagner,
Raymond S. (JSC-EV811) <<a href="mailto:raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov">raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov</a>>; Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600) <<a href="mailto:bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov">bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov</a>><b><br>
Subject:</b> Re: [EXTERNAL] [Sls-rfm] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review</p>
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<p style="margin:0in">Kevin,</p>
<p style="margin:0in"> </p>
<p style="margin:0in">One more thing, I thought from our SIG WG that you and Johnathan Wilmott agreed to notify of the first review. I never got anything from either of you on that.</p>
<p style="margin:0in"> </p>
<p style="margin:0in">Regards,</p>
<p style="margin:0in"> </p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Wai Fong, Ph.D.</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Communications Engineer</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Flight Microwave and Telecommunications Systems Branch</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">NASA Goddard Space Flight Center</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Code 567</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Greenbelt, MD 20771</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"> </p>
<p style="margin:0in"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Kevin K Gifford <</span><a href="mailto:kevin.gifford@colorado.edu"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">kevin.gifford@colorado.edu</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">><b><br>
Date: </b>Friday, December 3, 2021 at 10:48 AM<b><br>
To: </b>"Fong, Wai H. (GSFC-5670)" <</span><a href="mailto:wai.h.fong@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">wai.h.fong@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>, "Shames, Peter M (JPL-312B)[JPL Employee]" <</span><a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">><b><br>
Cc: </b>Enrico Vassallo <</span><a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>, Shannon Rodriguez-sanabria <</span><a href="mailto:shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>,
WING-TSZ LEE <</span><a href="mailto:wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>, "Lee, Dennis K (JPL-332G)[JPL Employee]" <</span><a href="mailto:dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>,
Victor Sank <</span><a href="mailto:victor.j.sank@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">victor.j.sank@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>, "Wagner, Raymond S. (JSC-EV811)" <</span><a href="mailto:raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>,
"Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600)" <</span><a href="mailto:bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>, Kevin K Gifford <</span><a href="mailto:kevin.gifford@colorado.edu"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">kevin.gifford@colorado.edu</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">><b><br>
Subject: </b>Re: [EXTERNAL] [Sls-rfm] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Wai - </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Thank you for the reply, as I stated previously, the document has already gone through Agency Review-01 and CESG review so this is not an entire document review request.</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Kevin</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><b>From:</b> Fong, Wai H. (GSFC-5670) <<a href="mailto:wai.h.fong@nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">wai.h.fong@nasa.gov</span></a>><b><br>
Sent:</b> Friday, December 3, 2021 8:41 AM<b><br>
To:</b> Kevin K Gifford <<a href="mailto:kevin.gifford@colorado.edu"><span style="color:#0082BF">kevin.gifford@colorado.edu</span></a>>; Shames, Peter M (JPL-312B)[JPL Employee] <<a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a>><b><br>
Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"><span style="color:#0082BF">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</span></a> <<a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"><span style="color:#0082BF">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</span></a>>; Rodriguez, Shannon (GSFC-5670) <<a href="mailto:shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov</span></a>>;
Lee, Wing-tsz (GSFC-5670) <<a href="mailto:wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov</span></a>>; Lee, Dennis K (JPL-332G)[JPL Employee] <<a href="mailto:dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a>>;
Sank, Victor J. (GSFC-567.0)[SCIENCE SYSTEMS AND APPLICATIONS INC] <<a href="mailto:victor.j.sank@nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">victor.j.sank@nasa.gov</span></a>>; Wagner, Raymond S. (JSC-EV811) <<a href="mailto:raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov</span></a>>;
Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600) <<a href="mailto:bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov</span></a>><b><br>
Subject:</b> Re: [EXTERNAL] [Sls-rfm] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review
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<p style="margin:0in">Kevin,</p>
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<p style="margin:0in">I’m only checking emails and the document’s over 100 pages long. 30 minutes would not be enough to even make sure the references were right. Also, because of our center’s continuing problems with announcements for documents to be reviewed,
we were never notified that that the first review ever took place. So, if you want a thorough review from me, you have to give me the opportunity to do it.</p>
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<p style="margin:0in">Regards,</p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Wai Fong, Ph.D.</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Communications Engineer</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Flight Microwave and Telecommunications Systems Branch</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">NASA Goddard Space Flight Center</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Code 567</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Greenbelt, MD 20771</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Kevin K Gifford <</span><a href="mailto:kevin.gifford@colorado.edu"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">kevin.gifford@colorado.edu</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">><b><br>
Date: </b>Friday, December 3, 2021 at 10:36 AM<b><br>
To: </b>"Fong, Wai H. (GSFC-5670)" <</span><a href="mailto:wai.h.fong@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">wai.h.fong@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>, "Shames, Peter M (JPL-312B)[JPL Employee]" <</span><a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">><b><br>
Cc: </b>Enrico Vassallo <</span><a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>, Shannon Rodriguez-sanabria <</span><a href="mailto:shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>,
WING-TSZ LEE <</span><a href="mailto:wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>, "Lee, Dennis K (JPL-332G)[JPL Employee]" <</span><a href="mailto:dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>,
Victor Sank <</span><a href="mailto:victor.j.sank@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">victor.j.sank@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>, Kevin K Gifford <</span><a href="mailto:kevin.gifford@colorado.edu"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">kevin.gifford@colorado.edu</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>,
"Wagner, Raymond S. (JSC-EV811)" <</span><a href="mailto:raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>, "Edwards, Bernard L. (GSFC-5600)" <</span><a href="mailto:bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">bernard.l.edwards@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">><b><br>
Subject: </b>Re: [EXTERNAL] [Sls-rfm] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Hi Wai - </span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">I would like to get the document published ASAP. The document has already gone through Agency Review-01 and CESG review so this is not an entire document review request.</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt"> </span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Can you take 30 minutes and review the updates please?
</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Thanks.</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Kevin</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><b>From:</b> Fong, Wai H. (GSFC-5670) <<a href="mailto:wai.h.fong@nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">wai.h.fong@nasa.gov</span></a>><b><br>
Sent:</b> Friday, December 3, 2021 8:29 AM<b><br>
To:</b> Kevin K Gifford <<a href="mailto:kevin.gifford@colorado.edu"><span style="color:#0082BF">kevin.gifford@colorado.edu</span></a>>; Shames, Peter M (JPL-312B)[JPL Employee] <<a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a>><b><br>
Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"><span style="color:#0082BF">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</span></a> <<a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"><span style="color:#0082BF">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</span></a>>; Rodriguez, Shannon (GSFC-5670) <<a href="mailto:shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">shannon.rodriguez-1@nasa.gov</span></a>>;
Lee, Wing-tsz (GSFC-5670) <<a href="mailto:wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">wing-tsz.lee-1@nasa.gov</span></a>>; Lee, Dennis K (JPL-332G)[JPL Employee] <<a href="mailto:dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a>>;
Sank, Victor J. (GSFC-567.0)[SCIENCE SYSTEMS AND APPLICATIONS INC] <<a href="mailto:victor.j.sank@nasa.gov"><span style="color:#0082BF">victor.j.sank@nasa.gov</span></a>><b><br>
Subject:</b> Re: [EXTERNAL] [Sls-rfm] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review
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<p style="margin:0in">Kevin, Peter;</p>
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<p style="margin:0in">I’m on vacation this month but I would like to give this a proper review. Can you delay the review deadline until mid or late January?</p>
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<p style="margin:0in">Regards,</p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Wai Fong, Ph.D.</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Communications Engineer</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Flight Microwave and Telecommunications Systems Branch</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">NASA Goddard Space Flight Center</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Code 567</span></p>
<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Greenbelt, MD 20771</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt">SLS-RFM <</span><a href="mailto:sls-rfm-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">sls-rfm-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">>
on behalf of Enrico Vassallo <</span><a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">><b><br>
Date: </b>Thursday, December 2, 2021 at 2:10 PM<b><br>
To: </b>"</span><a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">" <</span><a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">><b><br>
Cc: </b>Kevin K Gifford <</span><a href="mailto:kevin.gifford@colorado.edu"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">kevin.gifford@colorado.edu</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">><b><br>
Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] [Sls-rfm] Fw: CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review<b><br>
Resent-From: </b>"Content-filter at st.scanss.org" <</span><a href="mailto:virusalert@scanss.org"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">virusalert@scanss.org</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">><b><br>
Resent-To: </b><</span><a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org"><span style="font-size:12.0pt; color:#0082BF">sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</span></a><span style="font-size:12.0pt">><b><br>
Resent-Date: </b>Thursday, December 2, 2021 at 2:06 PM</span></p>
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<p style="margin:0in"><span style="font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Since Kevin is not a member of RFM WG, his emails are not forwarded by the RFM mailing list server.</span>
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Please review the attached document and let me have your comments by Dec 15 latest.</span>
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Regards, Enrico</span> <span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:purple">
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From: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"Kevin K Gifford" <</span><a href="mailto:kevin.gifford@colorado.edu"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">kevin.gifford@colorado.edu</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">></span>
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To: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"Jonathan Wilmot" <</span><a href="mailto:jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>,
"</span><a href="mailto:Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">" <</span><a href="mailto:Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>,
"</span><a href="mailto:dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">" <</span><a href="mailto:dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>,
"</span><a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">" <</span><a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>,
"</span><a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">" <</span><a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">></span>
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Cc: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"Shames, Peter M (US 312B)" <</span><a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>,
"Ray Wagner" <</span><a href="mailto:raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">raymond.s.wagner@nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>, "CCSDS Secretariat"
<</span><a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>, "Kevin K Gifford" <</span><a href="mailto:kevin.gifford@colorado.edu"><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:#0082BF">kevin.gifford@colorado.edu</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">></span>
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Date: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">02/12/21 16:51</span>
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Subject: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt; font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">CCSDS-883-R-0 CESG Request for final review</span>
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Dear Jonathan, Ignacio, Dennis, Enrico, SLS-RFM - <br>
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I have worked with Dr. Peter Shames to update CCSDS-883-0-R-0 to ensure SLS concerns are properly addressed per the CESG.</span>
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The attached CCSDS-883-0-R-0 document is a result of Peter and I's efforts to assuage any remaining concerns.</span>
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I am requesting that SLS reviews the updates to the document for consensus purposes.</span>
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-- All updates are tracked via "Track Changes"</span> <span style="font-size:12.0pt">
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-- A suggestion is to simply click "Next Change" to see the updates</span> <span style="font-size:12.0pt">
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-- The primary updates (sans editorial nits) are on pages 1-1, 1-2, 2-1, 2-5, 3-1 and 3-2</span>
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@Jonathan: Please review and provide your acceptance or any remaining concerns at your earliest convenience.</span>
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@Igancio: Can you and SLS-RFM please review and provide your acceptance or any remaining concerns at your earliest convenience.</span>
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I believe that the review will take minimal time as Peter and I worked to ensure the updates would resolve SLS concerns expressed to the CESG.</span>
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Please let me know if any questions.</span> <span style="font-size:12.0pt"><br>
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Thanks to all!</span> <span style="font-size:12.0pt"><br>
<br>
Kevin</span> </p>
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