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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Colin,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Please find my comments below.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">-Erik<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">1)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Section 1.7 -- Same comment as that for the abstract entities definition book<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">2)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Re reference [12] citation on pg 1-5, this is what is used in the CSS ADD: “Functional Resources for Cross Support Services. Draft Technical Note, CSSACSS_FRs-TN-0.01. N.p.:
n.p., April 2013.” So presumably there is some sort of ability/precedent for referencing nonpublished work (believe it or not).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">3)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Pg 3-3: Definition of “purpose” parameter: suggest revising this as the definition includes "… In the event that the status specified is ‘OTHER’…" -- There is no "status"
parameter as far as I can see in here as I think this was delegated to the "downstream" books.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">4)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Pg 3-15 – I found this bit to be confusing: “In the context of the SrvMgtAbstractEvent class the usage of the following AbstractEvent parameters (as described in Ref. [8])
should be noted:..” and this followed by a table for the PIF types. The Abstract Event book does not define these—and the description column says that the values come from Ref [7] (concept book, which is technically not normative). I think just a simple list
of the planning information types is needed here? (For making a the request and identifying the type of output).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">5)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Pg 3-20: noting the planning info types are identified, do we need something in here that identifies the overall list of information entities for service management – I think
we may have discuss this but I do not recall any well-defined approach -- do we just register them in SANA? In which case why would we define them here?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">6)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Pg 3-22: I am curious as to what John may make of this definition of a functional resource parameter. Basically just the abstract parameter with the addition of the functional
resource nickname. This may be okay if we are just using this to identify the functional resource but I think there might be a little more discussion to be had in here…<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">7)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Pg A-1: the sanaregistry discussion for "originatingOrganization” appears to have been borrowed directly from the simple schedule format book -- I don't think we want to
have "SchedulePublisher” as the role definition for originatingOrganization in the common data entities book. I think probably we want to state some sort of rule that this is further defined by the particular "using" recommendations.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">8)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Pg A2: use of unregistered values: should we add verbiage in here that somehow is "binding" on the client or using recommendations such that we don't have to repeat this
bit in each book?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> SMWG <smwg-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Colin.Haddow@esa.int<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, December 14, 2018 08:47<br>
<b>To:</b> CCSDS SMWG ML(smwg@mailman.ccsds.org) <smwg@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Wolfgang.Frase@dlr.de<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Smwg] 902x12r0_02 - Service Management Common Data Entities - Updated draft<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Dear all,</span>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
I've just uploaded the latest draft of the Service Management Common Data Entities Book to CWE, This contains the updates in line with the discussions and agreements from Berlin.</span><br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
The Service Management Common Data Entities document can be found at the following URL.</span>
<br>
<br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Document: </span><a href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/Magenta/Service%20Management%20Common%20Data%20Entities/White%20Book/Drafts/902x12r0_02%20-%20Service%20Management%20Common%20Data%20Entities%20.doc"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/Magenta/Service%20Management%20Common%20Data%20Entities/White%20Book/Drafts/902x12r0_02%20-%20Service%20Management%20Common%20Data%20Entities%20.doc</span></a><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:blue">
</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"> </span> <br>
<br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">In addition the a consistent set of Schemas and UML Models for the following draft books;</span>
<o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Abstract Event Definition,</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Service Management Common Data Entities</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Planning Information Formats</span>
<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Service Management Utilization Request Formats</span><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
<p class="MsoNormal"><br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">can be found at the following URLs;</span>
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<br>
<br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Schema: </span><a href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/Schemas/902%20Schema%2020181214.zip"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/Schemas/902%20Schema%2020181214.zip</span></a>
<br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">UML Model: </span><a href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/UML%20Model/902%20UML%20Model%2020181214.zip"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/UML%20Model/902%20UML%20Model%2020181214.zip</span></a><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
Cheers for now,</span> <br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
Colin</span> <br>
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