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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Colin,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Please find my comments below. In general, I think the document is in very good shape.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">-Erik<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">1)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Section 1.7 – Reference [1] is now a silver book and so I don't think it can do much good in terms of providing an overview of UML diagramming conventions. I suggest just
simply leave it as UML version 2.4.1 <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">2)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">figure 3-1: I could not quite get out of the diagram that the name for the event is somehow required. Certainly I can see that a time is required and there is verbiage indicating
how this is done that backs up the UML diagram. It seems to me that a time without indication of what the event is about is kind of useless :-) certainly there is a type field but this is optional and I'm not quite sure that type is the same thing as the
name of the event.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">3)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D">Annex A, A.2.2 -- given that this is going to be a general abstract definition for CCSDS I don't think we can really state that user should be a spacecraft identifier per
SANA. My suggestion is that perhaps we consider some verbiage that indicates that it is the "using" recommendations/document that identifies the particular sanaregistry to be used for "user". Alternatively, perhaps we could consider some sort of statement
to the effect that unless otherwise stated by the using document that the registry to be assumed is the SANA spacecraft registry.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><end comments><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> SMWG <smwg-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Colin.Haddow@esa.int<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, December 14, 2018 08:43<br>
<b>To:</b> CCSDS SMWG ML(smwg@mailman.ccsds.org) <smwg@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Wolfgang.Frase@dlr.de<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Smwg] 902x13r0_02 - Abstract Event Definition - Updated draft<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Dear all,</span>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
I've just uploaded the latest draft of the Abstract Event Definition Book to CWE, This contains the updates in line with the discussions and agreements from Berlin.</span><br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
The Abstract Event Definition document can be found at the following URL.</span> <br>
<br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Document: </span><a href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/Magenta/Abstract%20Event%20Definition/White%20Book/Drafts/902x13r0_02%20-%20Abstract%20Event%20Definition.doc"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/Magenta/Abstract%20Event%20Definition/White%20Book/Drafts/902x13r0_02%20-%20Abstract%20Event%20Definition.doc</span></a><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">
</span><br>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">In addition the a consistent set of Schemas and UML Models for the following draft books;</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Abstract Event Definition,</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Service Management Common Data Entities</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Planning Information Formats</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Service Management Utilization Request Formats</span><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
<p class="MsoNormal"><br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">can be found at the following URLs;</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Schema: </span><a href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/Schemas/902%20Schema%2020181214.zip"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/Schemas/902%20Schema%2020181214.zip</span></a>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">UML Model: </span><a href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/UML%20Model/902%20UML%20Model%2020181214.zip"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">https://cwe.ccsds.org/css/docs/CSS-SM/CWE%20Private/Book%20Production/UML%20Model/902%20UML%20Model%2020181214.zip</span></a><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
Cheers for now,</span> <br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
Colin</span> <br>
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