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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear Tom,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The SLP WG has reviewed the attached draft copy of USLP and has the following comments to be included in the final copy before publication as the Version 3 blue book (732.1-B-3).<o:p></o:p></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">In Section 2.1.2.1, extra spaces were found in front of “MAP ID” in the 3<sup>rd</sup> paragraph on p2-2<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">In Section 2.1.4, in the 1<sup>st</sup> paragraph, extra spaces found before “ The definition …”<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">In Section 2.2.2, in the 1<sup>st</sup> paragraph, extra spaces found around the word, “ID”<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">In 2.2.4.3, in the 1<sup>st</sup> paragraph, extra spaces before the word, “PVNs”<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">In 3.2.1, Replace the word, “and” with the word, “or” i.e., MAP Packet or VC Packet<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">3.3.2.9.3, in the NOTE, extra spaces found in the NOTE around the words, “Processing of USLP frames…”<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">3.6.3.7.3, Extra spaces found before the words, “processing of frames”<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">4.3.11.2 NOTE 2 – Allow the sentence to be singular or plural i.e., “The TC Synchronization and Coding Sublayer encodes the Transfer Frame(s) to protect it/them from …”<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">6.3.1, missing the reference to table 6-3 : “so a managed parameter defined in either table 6-2 (VC) or table 6-3 (MAP) of 6.6 indicates …”<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">6.4.1, In the 2<sup>nd</sup> paragraph, “(one VC or MAP or more than one VC or MAP per SA)”<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">6.4.1, In the 3<sup>nd</sup> paragraph, “just one VC or MAP each are present…may not be the same for all VCs(or MAPs).”<o:p></o:p></li></ol>
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<p class="MsoNormal">That is all the comments.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Happy Holidays !<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Greg Kazz<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">CCSDS SLP WG Chair<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black;mso-ligatures:none">From:
</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black;mso-ligatures:none">SLS-SLP <sls-slp-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org> on behalf of "Kazz, Greg (US 312B) via SLS-SLP" <sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Reply-To: </b>"Kazz, Greg (US 312B)" <greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, November 29, 2023 at 2:24 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>"Kazz, Greg (US 312B) via SLS-SLP" <sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Sls-slp] FW: [EXTERNAL] RE: CCSDS 732.1-B (USLP) RIDs from Fall 2023 CCSDS meeting<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear SLP WG,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">The secretariat has made the changes we approved (via RID resolution) to USLP.
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<p class="MsoNormal">We are being asked to review the document one more time, to ensure those updates are correct.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">So please review the attached document and please let me know if you have found any issues by Dec. 15<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Greg<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">CCSDS SLP WG chair<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black;mso-ligatures:none">From:
</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black;mso-ligatures:none">Thomas Gannett <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, November 29, 2023 at 2:10 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>"Kazz, Greg (US 312B)" <greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Cc: </b>'Ignacio Aguilar Sanchez' <Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int>, 'Moury Gilles' <Gilles.Moury@cnes.fr>, 'Matt Cosby' <matt.cosby@goonhilly.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] RE: CCSDS 732.1-B (USLP) RIDs from Fall 2023 CCSDS meeting<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Greg:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">The attached file implements the Pink-2.1 RIDs. Pending WG agreement with the changes, Ignacio should review it for AD approval and (if approved) issue an Area resolution to submit it for CESG approval polling.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Tom<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif;color:#1F497D;mso-ligatures:none">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;mso-ligatures:none">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;mso-ligatures:none"> Kazz, Greg (US 312B) [mailto:greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov]
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<b>Sent:</b> Monday, November 13, 2023 3:29 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Thomas Gannett<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Ignacio Aguilar Sanchez; Moury Gilles; Matt Cosby<br>
<b>Subject:</b> CCSDS 732.1-B (USLP) RIDs from Fall 2023 CCSDS meeting<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi Tom,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Attached are the 7 ESA (in one Word file) and the 7 NASA (each in its own text file) RID resolutions completed by the SLP WG during the Fall 2023 CCSDS meetings at the Hague.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">I have notified all RID authors of these resolutions both on the NASA and ESA sides.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">The SLP WG requests that the secretariat make the changes documented in the RID resolutions. Many of the RIDs are editorial in nature.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Please let me know if you have any questions as you make modifications to CCSDS 732.1-B.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Greg<o:p></o:p></p>
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