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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear SLP WG,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">I have received only positive feedback on the rewording of Section 2.2 per my proposal, so my next step is to updated the EPP document with this text along with the RID resolutions to the other 3 ESA RIDs
that we generated during the meeting. Thereafter I will send the updated document for final quick check by the SLP WG and then onward to Tom Gannett.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Best Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Greg<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">"Kazz, Greg J (US 312B)" <greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, October 23, 2019 at 2:05 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>"Kazz, Greg J (US 312B) via SLS-SLP" <sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Proposed Text to RID 4 against EPP<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear SLP WG,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please review my proposal for rewriting Section 2.2 Features of the Encapsulation Protocol to deemphasize the “services” but keeping the key elements of this section. Attached is a Word file containing the “FROM” and “TO” sections for your
comment and approval. It is in RID 4 i.e., the last RID in this attached file.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I would like to be able to deliver these finalized RIDs to the secretariat within one week, so please provide me your comments no later than Oct 30.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Greg Kazz</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Principal Engineer</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Technical Group Supervisor,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Project Software and End-to-End Information Systems Engineering (312B)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Jet Propulsion Laboratory</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">4800 Oak Grove Dr., M/S 301-490</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="ES-MX" style="font-size:11.0pt">Pasadena, CA 91109</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="ES-MX" style="font-size:11.0pt">1+(818)393 6529(voice)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">1</span><span lang="ES-MX" style="font-size:11.0pt">+(818)393 6871(fax)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="ES-MX" style="font-size:11.0pt">email: greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov
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